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Pitter-Patter
I stood as lonely as the tallest
building in Dubai
drier than the deserts in Peru
until your rain fell
the softest sweetest drops
in a long time
it's been longer than I can remember
and now you are
collaborating with my heartbeat
while you sleep.
Published 11th Dec 2009
| Edited 28th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2009 6:37pm
Sweet little piece. No great shakes, but pleasent and very well written:-)
11th Dec 2009 11:29pm
Thanks Jack - the sort of thing you'd write down on the back of a napkin but no less agreeable for that.
Anonymous
13th Dec 2009 3:04am
hope you be never void of this pitter-patter A.This one is very sweet ,i feel what makes it all the more moving is a faint undertone of pain beneath the sweet calm,brilliant poem.Bless you.
