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Stop and think
I have much to be greatful for,
even though I sleep on the floor.
I am happy.
Twenty cats and counting..
Crazy haired girl, yeah that's me.
Life gives you so much, why exchange it for a puff?
Influences hit, self restraint.. hold firm to that grip.
Wondering when we will move past and take a good look at the hourglass.
Published 26th Jul 2017
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26th Jul 2017 8:43pm
26th Jul 2017 8:50pm
27th Jul 2017 6:34am
Sometimes the most compelling truths are found in the nuances of astute worldly observations!
4th Aug 2017 5:54am
"Because the drugs never work
They're gonna give you a smirk
'Cause they got methods of keepin' you clean
They gonna rip up your heads
Your aspirations to shreds
Another cog in the murder machine"
MCR-
just wow- I love the pure emotional release I received from this piece -
I am a cat dude- I write a lot for my blue russian named Papillon -
when I write about love its for her. lol little trade secret there. keep up the great words.
They're gonna give you a smirk
'Cause they got methods of keepin' you clean
They gonna rip up your heads
Your aspirations to shreds
Another cog in the murder machine"
MCR-
just wow- I love the pure emotional release I received from this piece -
I am a cat dude- I write a lot for my blue russian named Papillon -
when I write about love its for her. lol little trade secret there. keep up the great words.
5th Jan 2018 6:30pm
This write carries very well
it doesn't stop and dwell too long
nice imagery you paint
and it has a positive undertone
awesome write NewDaysToGaze
well penned
keep'em coming.
it doesn't stop and dwell too long
nice imagery you paint
and it has a positive undertone
awesome write NewDaysToGaze
well penned
keep'em coming.
8th Mar 2018 8:12pm
Very pure and natural write. Something I always appreciate. That you are happy is truly what matters. :)
25th Mar 2018 7:56pm
I like the idea that life gives you what you should be grateful for. Very rarely l read such gratitude.
