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Sex Before You
It was just sex
Just two adults
fucking each other
until they were numb
there was no love
no connection beyond
the animal like instinct to
release the tension of the day
two bodies racing to the finish line
and then get dressed
and be on your way
It was never enough for me
Then I saw you
Just two adults
fucking each other
until they were numb
there was no love
no connection beyond
the animal like instinct to
release the tension of the day
two bodies racing to the finish line
and then get dressed
and be on your way
It was never enough for me
Then I saw you
Published 24th Jul 2017
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24th Jul 2017 11:55am
The need for that release can over shadow everything else. I wish I had someone to help me become numb so that afterwards I could live fully at home. Because sadly she doesn't quench that fire. Maybe I am just delusional.
26th Jul 2017 10:45am
24th Jul 2017 12:29pm
26th Jul 2017 10:42am
Starts unashamedly, animally erotic, ends on a romantic line (if one interprets 'saw you' as 'met you'). Favourite line:
Two bodies racing to the finish line.
Two bodies racing to the finish line.
26th Jul 2017 10:46am
25th Jul 2017 11:41pm
here was no love
no connection beyond
the animal like instinct to
release the tension of the day .....I feel the hunger in these words. Long gone are the days that this would happen to me. I'm now married and even though I love him so much I do miss the feeling of lust.
no connection beyond
the animal like instinct to
release the tension of the day .....I feel the hunger in these words. Long gone are the days that this would happen to me. I'm now married and even though I love him so much I do miss the feeling of lust.
26th Jul 2017 10:50am
26th Jun 2023 4:29pm
