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Mercy theif
Poetry is my unanswerd riddle; a perpetual journey paved with hidden stones.
Maybe it leads to my heart. Or from it...
The shape of my dreams, sepia tones behind a simple frame, beguiles.
And when you kiss me goodnight I lay in the dark with pieces missing,
tangled among cotton and shadow, seductively woven between my uncovered limbs like eager vines of Morning Glory, blue celeste.
Coquette. it's like I wear the name on my tank top.
I can't hide myself. Perceived as an exotic dancer
without a stage; rhinestone earrings my only costume.
Naked and scornful in the eyes of strangers.
My heart is a gypsy in the valley of forgetting
and I'm lost between the rain in my soldier's brown eyes
and dashing strangers who offer their rough mercy
if I lay down for it.
(Artwork: Antonio Diaz)
Maybe it leads to my heart. Or from it...
The shape of my dreams, sepia tones behind a simple frame, beguiles.
And when you kiss me goodnight I lay in the dark with pieces missing,
tangled among cotton and shadow, seductively woven between my uncovered limbs like eager vines of Morning Glory, blue celeste.
Coquette. it's like I wear the name on my tank top.
I can't hide myself. Perceived as an exotic dancer
without a stage; rhinestone earrings my only costume.
Naked and scornful in the eyes of strangers.
My heart is a gypsy in the valley of forgetting
and I'm lost between the rain in my soldier's brown eyes
and dashing strangers who offer their rough mercy
if I lay down for it.
(Artwork: Antonio Diaz)
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Re. Mercy theif
strange eyes, Kas, brown or any shade of seduction;
your poem dances -
exotically...
your poem dances -
exotically...
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25th Jul 2017 1:42am
Seduction comes in many shades, John, many forms, all of them beautiful. And thank you, so very much for such thoughtful words, I just adore them...
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2017 9:08am
Beautiful !!
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25th Jul 2017 00:56am
I love ' my heart is a gypsy in the valley of forgetting, the poem has a lot of good lines and imageries and still maintains a mystery or intrigue...
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25th Jul 2017 6:10am
Thanks so much for commenting, PR, even as my own have been lacking, I really appreciate your opinion...
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2017 1:28am
Sweet Kasai, oh the choices we sometimes struggle to make all for the sake of needing memory loss...even if only for a temporary bit of time...hoping those missing pieces will find their way back once your time "on stage" is over...achingly beautiful...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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25th Jul 2017 6:25am
Aww, such a kind and lovely lady you are, Taryn, the way you leave me with a smile even through the ache of my words. Perhaps those temporary lapses, be them good or bad, help us to survive it all. I truly thank you for taking the journey with me. If those pieces are out there, we will be sure to find them one day...
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27th Jul 2017 7:29am
Kasai. This is beautiful and amazing. I especially love the opening lines. "Poetry is my unanswerd riddle; a perpetual journey paved with hidden stones./Maybe it leads to my heart. Or from it..." It leads me on a journey and path. Well done.
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28th Jul 2017 7:32am
Thanks so much for the great comment, eswaller, glad you could share my journey and I'm honored by the list add...
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29th Jul 2017 5:53am
Loved this write. It begins with the beauty of a poetic question, then ends with the savages of human and artistic relationships.
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5th Aug 2019 10:33pm
That it does CaptainCur, that it does. Thanks so much for the kind words, glad you enjoyed...
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 4:44am
Your pieces are absorbing....a bit of the romantic, a bit of the post modern, a bit of the intellectual...really quite good! I'll look forward to reading more.
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5th Aug 2019 10:36pm
Absorbing...I like that, and thank you. Glad you enjoyed and appreciate your talking the time to comment. Happy reading...