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Once Before
I've touched her before.
Once
I remember.
My fingertips down the middle of her breast
Grazing her nipples
as I breathe her in
Then down the shape of her hips
Until I reach her thighs
Pushing them aside
The softness of her lips I feel in my hands
My fingers sail through her canal
Against her fragile walls her river flows
Yes
I've touched her
Once
I remember.
My fingertips down the middle of her breast
Grazing her nipples
as I breathe her in
Then down the shape of her hips
Until I reach her thighs
Pushing them aside
The softness of her lips I feel in my hands
My fingers sail through her canal
Against her fragile walls her river flows
Yes
I've touched her
Published 3rd Sep 2011
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2011 8:40pm
that was simply HOT!
3rd Sep 2011 9:13pm
Anonymous
4th Sep 2011 00:01am
Hi Emmanuelle (or is it Moses?) Your poem has a warm, conversational and very human feel to it, largely created by the title and its place in the poem and I liked that a lot, it really defined the poem without detracting from its 'hot' factor. I wonder are you male or female (your handle and the only other poem of yours I've read leave me wondering). I also wonder if English is your first language for although you write really well, sensuously and proficiently, there are small tell-tales about how you use plurals etc. They are minor, technicalities only, I don't mean to criticize, they just make me wonder. Strong poem, good erotica. redTbird
4th Sep 2011 1:31am
4th Sep 2011 7:02pm
