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Words Within Words { A FromTheAsh and Naajir Collab }
the mind ripples
inspiration trickles between two
seduced by the tones of you
secrets deduced by the poems in you
as your verbs slide over synapses
words glide across the irises
your vowels caressing flesh
while your consonants tease my Y's
in a sometimes wanton breath
I inhale your exhales in the midst of
pen sculpting images
into poetic proses
too potent to ignore
sensual aftershocks
felt in tremors
blood rush induced
heartbeats thumping softly
into a slow drumming sensation
percussion in the core
reverberating throughout our radius
whispered adjectives so sultry
even your nouns must quiver
beneath our shared breeze of misty intent
slightly damp with their desire
forming flammable precipitation
as your words yet again
light another fire
ignited by liquid sentiments
inspired from the ash
Author's Note:
Inspired by FromTheAsh's entry
for Poets Kings Erotic Comp
Published 19th Jul 2017
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Big big thanks to you hun for sharing your art
and allowing me to move within the exquisite
groove you cultivated here.Your original poem gave me a
much needed burst of spontaneity
It was an honor and a lot of fun vibing to your flow
Much respect!!!
and allowing me to move within the exquisite
groove you cultivated here.Your original poem gave me a
much needed burst of spontaneity
It was an honor and a lot of fun vibing to your flow
Much respect!!!
Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 2:34pm
It was a true pleasure to light the spark that started this fire, Naajir! Your pen creates waves and leaves a wake of emotion in its trail. Much honored by the collaboration. It breathes beautifully and warms deliciously. Thank you so much
19th Jul 2017 10:15am
Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 11:18am
Awesome tribute !!
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2017 4:37am
Well I must say Naaj....your pen flowed divinely between the lines of my Lovely Luna...creating a scene with the most intense foreplay...good lawwwwd...I must go off and wander now checking all drawers to make sure I've got double A's on reserve....
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
