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Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
I contemplated the meaning of wife
During my crisis of mid-life
She must be loving, loyal and true
For parts of me broken, she’d be the glue
Be caring, warm and full of compassion
Be hot, sexy and kinky after a fashion
She must be all the things I’m not
She must have all things I’ve not got
She has to be more than well meaning
Otherwise ‘Wife’ has no meaning
I contemplated the meaning of strife
Realising, as a husband, I had a shelf life
Despite my careful personal screening
And my pompous emancipated preening
It seems the prize I’d picked
Instead was the wife that had me tricked
I was constantly told I had to forgive
My biggest mistake was letting her live
She left in a flurry of venom and cussing
The meaning of ‘Strife’ meant nothing
I contemplated the meaning of knife
In my post divorce still life
It was kill or be killed
Not thrilled, I got killed
No weapons used
Words that abused
My hunting knife now cuts my skin
As guilt haunts me without and within
If you’re only into self cleaning
‘Knife’ has absolutely no meaning
I contemplated the meaning of life
Not just that of my ex-wife
Life has no mystery or purpose
Humanity not even a good circus
No master of evil, no heavenly call
We live and die and that is all
Maybe we live, get married and then die
Maybe we live, marry, cry then die
Life is just dancing in this macabre masked ball
‘Life’ and all that’s in it, means nothing at all
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Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
18th Jul 2017 6:32pm
David a lot of contemplating done here
your life means a lot to me
I even had a dream about you once
that how deep an impression
you've left upon my soul
so maybe rethink some of this
okay my friend..
love & hugs Brenda
your life means a lot to me
I even had a dream about you once
that how deep an impression
you've left upon my soul
so maybe rethink some of this
okay my friend..
love & hugs Brenda
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Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 1:04am
I am always rethinking things - maybe my mind is too active - maybe I think too much :-) I so appreciate the friendship of you and others on DU and it is my life and sometimes that is all that life is - but that's enough to keep me going :-) 1000 ehugs on their way :-)
Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 7:33pm
Life means everything (to me). Without life we could not reach each other through our words and our energy. I could not send hugs across the Pond to you. You (and I) could not encourage others who've been where we have been. You could not touch all those who are blessed by your presence in their world, myself included. Without life there would be no laughter. No music. I think at times we must take our strength and sense of self-worth from others when we falter. Your life means much, David. Many hugs headed your way...
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Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 1:11am
I cannot thank you enough for your response and find that I cannot disagree with anything you said, in fact I am touched by your caring. Like many I live from day to day - some days are good some are bad, none are ever the same and in that situation sometimes I can't see the woods for the trees. poetry, DU and the friends I have made here keeps me in the game - thank you - hugs on their way :-)
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18th Jul 2017 11:23pm
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18th Jul 2017 11:54pm
Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 1:12am
LMAO - you are always there with a funny smart ass comment - thank you you also keep me going and make me smile :-)
Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 11:27pm
I love the way it connects back at the end and it's raw and rough in all the right places. Very nice
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Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 1:13am
I can live with raw and rough - that sounds just like me (lol) thank you for the read and your kindly comments :-)
Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 00:04am
David, my friend, while Life can be difficult ( believe me I know, especially right now ), it is ANYTHING but nothing. It is everything that we share right now.
It's the poetry cut by the knife of our Hearts when we're forced to be Honest with ourself and those we Love.
It's the resonation of vibration connecting with the frequency of others, reminding them they're not alone.
It's the responses you receive from the genuine caring if others who connect with you, letting you know you're not alone.
It's this right here. It's Love and Time and Attention that could've been directed toward anyone else by any of the above responders ( and myself ). But we all chose you to share a piece of us with.
David, my friend, THIS is LIFE. And it's everything. ❤
It's the poetry cut by the knife of our Hearts when we're forced to be Honest with ourself and those we Love.
It's the resonation of vibration connecting with the frequency of others, reminding them they're not alone.
It's the responses you receive from the genuine caring if others who connect with you, letting you know you're not alone.
It's this right here. It's Love and Time and Attention that could've been directed toward anyone else by any of the above responders ( and myself ). But we all chose you to share a piece of us with.
David, my friend, THIS is LIFE. And it's everything. ❤
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Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 1:18am
I am glad to be considered a friend :-) (big Smile) the life that I have is my poetry, DU and the friends within DU - it is my life and in many ways my sanity. Thank you for such a caring response. :-)
Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
19th Jul 2017 5:26am
I enjoyed this, great message with excellent flow and excellent rhyme, like most of your work. great read
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Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
21st Jul 2017 3:46pm
Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
David...even though you wrote this as a comp entry, i cannot help but think that the sense of (deep) despair, and hopelessness, couldn't be soo aptly expressed, unless they were experienced first hand. If my perception is even somewhat close to being accurate, then my heart truly goes out to you.
While i cannot tell you that i know e x a c t l y how you feel, i can tell you that i can empathize with you when intense, life-altering events can completely overwhelm us emotionally! And--in turn--this can make us feel as though we aren't truly in control...that our purpose seems without merit...and Life is simply meaningless existence. It is then, that we can soo easily become victims of the cruelty in our own feed-back loop of flawed reasoning. ( and, even if from a personal pov,it's one that can become extremely difficult to break...just passing this along as friendly insight) :)
David, through your poetry, i have been privileged to become aware of a very special, creatively talented individual... one who is filled with incredible courage....inner strength of character...a wonderful sense of dry wit, and humor that has a delightfully darker twist. I am honored to consider you a friend, and outside of DU, my feelings would still remain the same.
Your poetry has not only enriched my life, but as evidenced by all those who follow you, many other lives as well.( and maybe that's one of Life's purposes/meanings--impacting other peoples' lives in as many positive ways as possible. Please know that i am glad, and grateful , for being granted the opportunity, of getting to know you a bit better, as well as being gifted with your works.
Pen on, mo chara! You, and your poetry matter! xo
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While i cannot tell you that i know e x a c t l y how you feel, i can tell you that i can empathize with you when intense, life-altering events can completely overwhelm us emotionally! And--in turn--this can make us feel as though we aren't truly in control...that our purpose seems without merit...and Life is simply meaningless existence. It is then, that we can soo easily become victims of the cruelty in our own feed-back loop of flawed reasoning. ( and, even if from a personal pov,it's one that can become extremely difficult to break...just passing this along as friendly insight) :)
David, through your poetry, i have been privileged to become aware of a very special, creatively talented individual... one who is filled with incredible courage....inner strength of character...a wonderful sense of dry wit, and humor that has a delightfully darker twist. I am honored to consider you a friend, and outside of DU, my feelings would still remain the same.
Your poetry has not only enriched my life, but as evidenced by all those who follow you, many other lives as well.( and maybe that's one of Life's purposes/meanings--impacting other peoples' lives in as many positive ways as possible. Please know that i am glad, and grateful , for being granted the opportunity, of getting to know you a bit better, as well as being gifted with your works.
Pen on, mo chara! You, and your poetry matter! xo
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Re: Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
21st Jul 2017 3:54pm
what a beautiful response - I am almost speechless :-/ In the main I believe to write accurately about despair you have to have experienced it - this is not always true. Needless to say what you said about it was accurate. I would also add that there are a few people on here like yourself that really keep me moving forward - not sure how I'd cope without it. so thank you for being a friend, for your empathy and support - you have no idea just how inspiring you are - thank you :-) 1,000,000 ehugs on their way to you :-)
Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
22nd Jul 2017 11:32am
day to day is how i take it myself,
even when that day seems dark & so bloody endless.
the nothings herein seem to encapsulate everything,
the minutiae of ease & struggle, joy & despair.
you are incomparably gifts
xo
even when that day seems dark & so bloody endless.
the nothings herein seem to encapsulate everything,
the minutiae of ease & struggle, joy & despair.
you are incomparably gifts
xo
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Re. Nothing - - - for the 'Meaning' Comp
22nd Jul 2017 5:21pm
I agree - sometimes you can't see the abyss if you stop staring into it - one day at a time is probably the best policy - thank you for your wise and caring words :-)
Hugs :-)
Hugs :-)