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of sun & pomegranates
my infidel lips
carry prayers to the sun
where they get lost
inside god's womb
& birth desire
he would that i
see him as a man
a lustful deity
with little tin soldiers
& barbie dolls
complete with poseable parts
i wonder what type of being is this
that he longs to fuck
my tiny little body
he invades my soul
rapes it & steals its purity
he whispers secrets
of his true nature
ones that i don't want to hear
i was blissful in my innocence
some would say get behind me
oh Lucifer dragon of old
though this spirit i know intimately
& know it to be our divine deity
unholy in deed
he is a man with hard on for war
& is very powerful
still something about me scares him
i am left to wonder what that is
he has convinced himself
i've fashioned for myself a pure god
to fornicate with in a dimension
he has yet to discover
jealous over me
he presses in on my thoughts
& demands answers
that my Earth bound body doesn't possess
he threw the sun down on me
using it as a weapon
having a magic that is bottled
& lovingly made inside me
i reversed his curse when
he sought to burn me down
the evolution of a goddess
stalked by her maker
where is my sanctuary?
when he has marked
all of my days
& there is no free will
only predestined fate
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 18th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 2:09pm
The questions in that last stanza, beautiful Dark Angel, are weighted with such longing. But you have that magic in your bottle and it will see you through.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
thank you graciously lovely one yes I think you are right our own personal magic is the key.. love you lady.. Crim
Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 2:42pm
Beautiful write !!!!
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18th Jul 2017 4:59pm
Nodding and grinning, Brenda, and THAT is a good thing, this poem was perfecto!
18th Jul 2017 6:57pm
18th Jul 2017 5:16pm
Your sanctuary might be right here, Lady Crim. As long as you have a place to freely vent, your god, and possibly Lucifer, will loose some of their sway over you.
jealous over me
he presses in on my thoughts
& demands answers
my Earth bound body doesn't possess
This is a wonderful work from a fiery Lady. Maybe time for you to press back when those unreasonable demands are made.
jealous over me
he presses in on my thoughts
& demands answers
my Earth bound body doesn't possess
This is a wonderful work from a fiery Lady. Maybe time for you to press back when those unreasonable demands are made.
18th Jul 2017 6:58pm
thank you Sir Crow this place is indeed my sanctuary believe me I do press back when needed ;) love Crim
Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 00:43am
classic crim
19th Jul 2017 3:20am
20th Jul 2017 8:07am
Primo sweet one purely primo
embrace the balance incept both to enlightenment
embrace the balance incept both to enlightenment
20th Jul 2017 9:35am
thank you graciously dearest Quiet one I will accept them both so that I may obtain enlightenment.. love Crim
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2017 00:48am
Brenda.. so fucking powerful.. wish i had room in my list.. i dig the way, you spit the venom called truth.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2017 4:09am
My Beautiful Brenda....you shine so brightly in this reflective ink...you know what it is...jealousy for something you have which he does not....he will have to learn to accept it...as you write of ALL you see which speaks to you...a gift he was not awarded...follow what is within you my love...always and forever...you radiate....
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
