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My Dark Queen Devlin
no one can step to you
there isn't another like you
not in the celestial
or the underworld
when you speak
i am brought to my knees
beautiful Devlin Queen over darkness
your demons bite & tear flesh
as your pen coils & strikes
while you ride the ether waves
sending out coded commands
they are heard & felt
by those of us with ears to hear
& unholy hell when you let loose rage
you shake foundations
i stand & stare in wonder
as the biggest man & bitch
cave to your wrath
left naked to be beaten
about by your blackened quill
this is the power of your ink
i have to admit
to taking cover
when i felt your fire
burning all in its way
as you know i have my own legion
there is a strict hierarchy
they scattered when you scorched
the Earth beneath them
so it is written so shall it be
you are the fucking bad ass
Queen over the dark
& i bow to your greatness
you have my love & loyalty
my sister dark star
who is not of this world
shall we play in the void
send out curses on the wind
on this night my demons
march with your's
to right all wrongs
hear them sing their song
continue to write it out
your scribes are black magic
nothing more powerful
than the written word
& you have chewed it up
spit it out & bent the dark
to your very will
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 17th Jul 2017
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17th Jul 2017 9:28am
real sensuous in her poetry when she's decoded, Crim;
the weapons you carry in your lusty legion...
the weapons you carry in your lusty legion...
17th Jul 2017 9:35am
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jul 2017 12:13pm
17th Jul 2017 11:13am
--- No worries, it's all out of love and nothing of conflict
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 2:45pm
I love both of You;)
17th Jul 2017 1:13pm
17th Jul 2017 8:34pm
thank you dearest Poet she is a truly beautiful force & Queen.. love you.. xx Brenda
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 1:17pm
beautiful tribute crim...m
17th Jul 2017 8:41pm
17th Jul 2017 1:31pm
She's likely gonna cry off of this intensely beautiful dedication...oh wait that was me...lol jk...outstanding stuff lady!
17th Jul 2017 8:43pm
aw thank you Poe she inspires me greatly with her writes that stir the depths of my soul.. love Crim
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 2:18pm
Well, criminy. I don't know this Devlin or her words, but if she brings my Dark Angel to her knees than she must be an amazing being. Beautiful tribute to your friend, my lovely Dark Angel. With you and your legion at her back, she's got one helluva back up!
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
17th Jul 2017 8:46pm
thank you lovely one she is indeed an amazing poetess & lady you should check her out.. I called her my Dark Queen but she is awe inspiring in all genres.. love you lady.. Crim
17th Jul 2017 2:28pm
17th Jul 2017 8:49pm
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 2:40pm
So, I am beyond myself
this A.M.
*black tears*
in tribute to your stellar tribute.
There is much to be said
about this poem; much contrast
as we are hand`in`hand in Darkness
though we bow to different legions.
You are my Ally, my friend, and you inspire
me to pen, poke and peel meanings to darkness.
But honestly, and wholeheartedly, you Reign here;
I am merely a Diva who enjoys much of the darkness.
Again, Thank You for this unforgettable piece,
my Queen ... Love & Hugs to you ... ~Devlin
17th Jul 2017 3:32pm
my beautiful Queen I am so honored & humbled by your black tears you have graced us with your awe inspiring writes of which I am grateful I have so much respect & love you so to me you are the reigning Queen & always will be so.. I love you :) love & hugs Brenda
17th Jul 2017 2:55pm
What as awesome bitch is your "Dark Queen Devlin,"
Brenda. With someone as powerful as this deity, you
are correct in stepping aside whenever shed is near.
Loved this rite.
Brenda. With someone as powerful as this deity, you
are correct in stepping aside whenever shed is near.
Loved this rite.
17th Jul 2017 3:38pm
thank you Jerry but it is I who is her bitch she is my Queen I love & adore her she is bad ass in poetic skill & personality.. love you my friend.. Brenda
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 3:42pm
My Beautiful Brenda...this homage to our Dark Queen and Sister in Trinity is a divine masterpiece...We stand in a line and she leads the way as hands are held together, DCT...it was meant to be just like this...The Fates destined it to be so and I am grateful...learning from the both of you tapping into your dark side is just as beautiful as any light...
I better have room for this!!!
I love you deeply, passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I better have room for this!!!
I love you deeply, passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
17th Jul 2017 8:58pm
thank you my love I will forever cherish & hold you two tight to my heart as the Trinity we were fated to be.. we learn much from you as well my erotic Goddess ;) I love you passionately love Brenda
Anonymous
17th Jul 2017 5:37pm
So true Crim and Devlin how devilishly sexy you both are.
Fantastic tribute Crim.
Fantastic tribute Crim.
17th Jul 2017 9:06pm
thank you dearest Ragnar for such a beautiful comment for me & my Queen.. love Crim
17th Jul 2017 7:46pm
I couldn't have said it better. Love to the Trinity from depths of this blackened heart.
17th Jul 2017 9:09pm
thank you graciously my Darkest Lord & we love you.. she is a deep inspiration as my Queen & a beautiful poetess.. just as you & our beloved Taryn is.. love Crim
17th Jul 2017 9:47pm
I felt the same and agree as well. I had to duck and cover. And this tribute is an honorable one. Great write Crim.
17th Jul 2017 9:54pm
thank you yes she is a truly beautiful force her poetry always makes me feel alive, feel something which is difficult for me through my happy pills.. love Crim
Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 3:07am
Brenda.. simply a beautiful tribute.. both you and Lady Devlin.. are tremendous poetess's.. the swamp is a better place because of you both.. i've learned so much from you both.. love you my sister.. and much love and respect to Lady Devlin.. great ink..
Dave
Dave
18th Jul 2017 1:01pm
thank you our brother Dave we love you too & know this from my heart this place wouldn't be the same without you.. I love you.. xo Brenda
18th Jul 2017 6:02pm
This is a thrilling tribute to the mighty Devlin, and reading this I realize how fierce you both are. I think there's space for two queens at DUP, no?
18th Jul 2017 6:51pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow could be we are both Queens in our own right.. happy you enjoyed this.. love Crim
