Insolent Deity

Damn, Crim napalm venom you scorch with in this
I do not want your wrath. Be easy beautiful
😉

thank you graciously dearest Quiet one for feeling this one just a bit of my darkness.. love Crim :)

Nice write Crim....m

than you graciously dearest Messier.. love Crim

Eh, he can't say he wasn't warned, and quite explicitly warned at that.

I could almost feel the heat of your words. Rant on! . . . Rant on!

thank you dearest Jerry your comment gifted me with smiles :) love you dear friend.. Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda...when you get this fierce and this spicy......daaaayummmm...do I get all squishy! Heart rate increases as your pulse rate is felt and I'm left squirmming in my seat!

Such a mix here...wanting peace and if it's not had, there will be your justified wrath...loved this my love!!

I love you madly, deeply...

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love for loving this side of me you are my backbone when i would back down & not let my fierce side show.. I love you madly.. love Brenda

Knowing some of my fierceness the way you do through my writes... know this,
I felt every bit of this through my bones.

thank you dearest Ragnar yes my friend you are felt deeply as well.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim

Makes me think of that age old saying: treat others as you would like to be treated.
But what happens when they take advantage? Only the strong survive and you, talented one, have
perfectly expressed it.
you never cease to amaze, brilliantly done...

thank you lovely graciously lovely Kasai I hope I'm that strong.. love Crim

Your 'dark and angry' side, is so fuckin beautiful, Crim! 😘

thank you beautiful Rain was feeling angry & dark this day.. love Brenda

Love the last stanza - what a condemnation beautifully written - I found myself lost in your words :-)

excellent ink as usual :-) - 1000 ehugs on their way :-)

thank you dearest David I am honored.. love & hugs Brenda

thank you John love the way you see this poem :) love Brenda

I'm not fluent in demon speak but I know class when I read it.  Beautifully written and thrill packed, Lady Crim at her fiery best.  

thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow.. love Crim

those battlefields never get silent, Crim;
scorched by fires, the rain won't come near...

thank you John indeed.. love Crim

The title is nearly as hot as your verse my dearest, I'm betting the warning made him shit his panties!! lol

aw thank you Poe you gifted me giggles with your comment :) love Crim

I travel towards you after days of desolate, isolation. "As the truth sets us free"! The darkness rewarded with quenching intoxication. Great words as always.
Thank you !
Christopher

thank you dearest Christopher for such a beautifully poetic comment.. love Brenda

My beautiful Dark Angel, I do so adore it when you don your spiked thigh high boots and crack the whip. Each stomp of foot in the rhythm of your words is like a firecracker going on. You brought the fire and left a smoke trail with this fierce write!

So much love for you...

thank you lovely one most graciously I too love it when the passion burns & bubbles to the surface.. love you lady.. Crim

Brenda.. truly beautiful, and brilliant as always.. you always deliver my sister.. loved this, and love you!!

























Dave

thank you Dave my brother.. I love you.. Brenda

"you have the barrel    
of a bottle to your lips    
playing Russian roulette"  

a reckless tongue creates its own karma

this is a darkly divine write
from beginning to end

thank you graciously dearest Naajir.. love Crim

thank you most graciously Todski :) love Brenda