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From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
Remember those years in the tiny walk up
You were writing erotica hoping to get discovered
I was working on my doctorate in sin
Doing night work at that porn theater in Times Square
That was dingy NYC
Long before organic
When Holly was working the Lincoln Tunnel entrance
You could get a quick suck for five bucks
Nobody cared if she had too many teeth
or if she was really a she
Life was less complicated back then
Holly bought mouthwash in industrial quantities
Hygiene on the fly still important
A woman still needs some dignity
If any money was left over at the end of the month
We went to the Scorpio bar on 14th between B and C
No hipsters back then
Just real people in dollar store clothes
Happy for a few snorts and a couple of rot gut chasers
There's no happy ending
Continuance is all you get
It was a soiled life
We got older and then real jobs
Then we got better clothes
The mac and cheese life rolled over
Looking back it was romantic in a dime store way
We laughed at our poverty
Grateful to have had the moment
A love affair in sordid NYC
We didn't overdose
That was good
You were writing erotica hoping to get discovered
I was working on my doctorate in sin
Doing night work at that porn theater in Times Square
That was dingy NYC
Long before organic
When Holly was working the Lincoln Tunnel entrance
You could get a quick suck for five bucks
Nobody cared if she had too many teeth
or if she was really a she
Life was less complicated back then
Holly bought mouthwash in industrial quantities
Hygiene on the fly still important
A woman still needs some dignity
If any money was left over at the end of the month
We went to the Scorpio bar on 14th between B and C
No hipsters back then
Just real people in dollar store clothes
Happy for a few snorts and a couple of rot gut chasers
There's no happy ending
Continuance is all you get
It was a soiled life
We got older and then real jobs
Then we got better clothes
The mac and cheese life rolled over
Looking back it was romantic in a dime store way
We laughed at our poverty
Grateful to have had the moment
A love affair in sordid NYC
We didn't overdose
That was good
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Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
Anonymous
13th Jul 2017 1:57pm
awesome write ps

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13th Jul 2017 1:59pm
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2017 2:03pm
oh yeah man he could rail them righteously

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Re: Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
13th Jul 2017 2:31pm
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
13th Jul 2017 2:41pm
I soooo love these types of storytelling poems. It rings authentic and while it is slightly profane, is very satisfying and beautiful.
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
13th Jul 2017 2:47pm
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
Anonymous
13th Jul 2017 5:50pm
Good stuff PS !!

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13th Jul 2017 9:23pm
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
13th Jul 2017 5:53pm
Poet maybe in a different bod I lived this life with you
I believe in reincarnation & could so see myself there..
fantastic write
love you..
xx Brenda
I believe in reincarnation & could so see myself there..
fantastic write
love you..
xx Brenda
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Re: Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
13th Jul 2017 9:25pm
I love writing about Lou characters, those simple days of working low life jobs and getting wasted with your best girl gives me pleasure to write about them Thx B Xo
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
13th Jul 2017 11:58pm
Re: Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
14th Jul 2017 2:18am
He was my desperate figure for a long time Was crushed when he passed Glad this was a fitting tribute of sorts
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
14th Jul 2017 2:26pm
nostalga can be pretty nostalgic, looking back - I love your descriptions, I could almost be there :-)
another big like :-)
another big like :-)
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14th Jul 2017 9:00pm
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
Anonymous
14th Jul 2017 2:39pm
You brought that world to life so perfectly I could see it all. (Country mouse wide eyed looking at your images) Continuance...ain't that the truth?

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14th Jul 2017 9:01pm
Re. From the Literary to the Profane ( Paying Homage to Lou Reed )
Anonymous
16th Jul 2017 2:36am
Boss.. brilliant..
Velvet Underground Like!!
Love Lou Reed..
Dave
Velvet Underground Like!!
Love Lou Reed..
Dave

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16th Jul 2017 2:53am