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Puppet on display
(Old write i found )
A pretty face all dolled up.....
Just to hide the tears...
A sexy body well... To everyone but herself
Dressed up to fool everyone
Disqising her true self hatered...
No one's to know no one's to see
She's broken barely able to breath...
Just putting on a good show
Because all the see is her looks anyways
Just a puppet on their string...
A pretty face all dolled up.....
Just to hide the tears...
A sexy body well... To everyone but herself
Dressed up to fool everyone
Disqising her true self hatered...
No one's to know no one's to see
She's broken barely able to breath...
Just putting on a good show
Because all the see is her looks anyways
Just a puppet on their string...
Published 30th Jun 2017
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1st Jul 2017 9:37am
gotta dance to your own music without the strings;
find the woman inside the doll.
nice...
find the woman inside the doll.
nice...
8th Jul 2017 1:19pm
It might be something you wrote some time ago, I feel the struggle of the young today trying to fit in today's way of life just remember not all people think about the beauty outside as there is much more to a person than what we see, a truthful write in today's youth 😊
10th Jul 2017 9:40pm
5th Aug 2017 12:37pm
26th Mar 2018 7:53am
I like the rawness of the poem. Just pouring out feelings and all that. I think this is really good for an old write.
