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words that brawl
there are infinite words
& ideas to tap into
let them play
on your tongue
taste them
feel their texture & voice
when they bite
relish in that
these are the best kind
swill them in your mouth
spit them on the page
let them breathe
& take on a life of their own
they'll beguile, moan & bleed
they're rough & raw
they will fuck you
& sometimes fuck you over
but they are a piece of your flesh
written in blood & cum
spew your semen
let them take seed
in another's mind
give birth to brawling thoughts
that go down swinging
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 26th Jun 2017
| Edited 27th Jun 2017
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Re. words that brawl
26th Jun 2017 6:31pm
Brawl in my mind, these words sure do,
Rough - made of quite tougher stuff than what my mind would dare pursue.
I ask, though, in your own pursuit of edge, need crudeness so large prevail?
I'd, were I rich, a bet to hedge, think not-so-raw would aid your tale.
Rough - made of quite tougher stuff than what my mind would dare pursue.
I ask, though, in your own pursuit of edge, need crudeness so large prevail?
I'd, were I rich, a bet to hedge, think not-so-raw would aid your tale.
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26th Jun 2017 7:23pm
thank you for the poetic comment I understand if this isn't to your taste.. love Crim
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2017 6:48pm
I'm loving these fightin' words, my lovely Dark Angel! There's a lot of attitude to be found in the fire of your inspiring words. This is a bit of a fierce stomping write. So much love...
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26th Jun 2017 7:24pm
thank you lovely one for such a fiercely beautiful comment.. love you lady.. xo Crim
Re. words that brawl
Close to the very best poem I have ever read by you, Brenda. That is all I will say.
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26th Jun 2017 7:25pm
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26th Jun 2017 7:53pm
The crimsin edge is sharp in this one. The raw and unfiltered words at the end are your signature. Why would you not autograph your masterpiece? Words (good, bad or indifferent) are meant to be shared. These be good words.
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 1:39am
Brenda.. this is pure excellence.. you never fail to amaze me.. love this, and you!!
Dave
Dave
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27th Jun 2017 2:44am
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27th Jun 2017 2:47am
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27th Jun 2017 2:51am
thank you dearest Poet yeah sometimes that's the only way to get through this life.. I knew you would understand.. love you.. xx Brenda
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 3:45am
My Beautiful Brenda how much I loved this fierce and all truthful ink! Words can do so much to everyone, bring upon many emotions and inspirations and when we run with them unfiltered those are the very best...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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27th Jun 2017 4:49am
thank you my love yes words make love to us, fuck us & just empower us.. I cherish you.. & love you passionately.. love Brenda
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