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Crim... this is a beautiful and wonderful piece. I love it. The imagery of the sun and fallen star are quite amazing. Good piece. I connect with it on some level. May you hold strong.

thank you beautiful Eswaller you made my night brighter :) love Crim

it flashes then fades, Crim:
the minutes of a sunset, spectacle of a fiery comet
or a star falling -
beauty is brief...

thank you John indeed it does.. love Crim

But you can get up...

thank you JJ you're right :) love Brenda

You've not burned out, my beautiful Angel. You're just resting, catching your breath. 'Rise from the wraith ranks..." so perfectly worded. I often feel that's what we are some days, shadows of who we are, who we could be, who we were; just remnants. So much love, my lady...

thank you lovely one for understanding what I was feeling here.. love you lady.. Crim

Oh Brenda, I believe that we are all shadows of ourselves and spend our whole lifetime trying to become a whole, vibrant person. This is a poem worthy of its name.

thank you Jerry for your understanding maybe once again someday right :) love Brenda

Matter cannot be created or destroyed. Only changes forms. You are not burning out but simply in transition to a new state.

You matter. Unless you multiply yourself by the speed of light squared then you energy.

Yes that was a science joke.

I will show myself out now.

P.S. Excellent write.

thank you Zach you have a beautiful & intelligent way of seeing things.. I used to be so sure of myself with dark writes.. now they are no longer my strong suit it's time to move on & evolve.. love Crim

this was hurtful ti read my pretty lady, ive no thing to say

thank you beautiful lady sorry to hurt your heart.. love Crim

your ink is so beautiful in its tragedy. It staggers the mind and leaves you wanting more. Well done, Lady Crim.

thank you graciously my Darkest Lord I'm afraid there will be more like this.. love Crim

Your writing constant as the sun rising proves you have not burned out. Great write

thank you dearest Ragnar just not quite feeling myself.. love Crim

Brenda.. truly lovely.. glad to know, i'm not the only writer who uses the word "wraith" bonus points.. into the list it goes.. love you..
















Dave

thank you Dave you brought me smiles tonight :) love you my brother.. xo Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda....like a falling star...flashing and burning out...oh my heavens...never in a million years...your shimmer lit the entire way reading this ink...and will continue doing so with each one hereafter...

My love...a spank to your sexy bottom and a kiss to follow...I love you passionately

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

aw thank you my love giggles at the spankins was worth the write just for that ;) I love you deeply.. love Brenda

your penumbra is far more beautiful than some people's sunlight
xo
love you lady

thank you graciously beautiful one I learned a new word today penumbra & what a beauty it is :) love you lady.. xo Brenda

a sadly beautiful poem from a beautiful soul :-)

1000 ehugs winging their way - David :-)

thank you David for the love.. love & hugs.. Brenda

We all fall! Not everyone gets up! You are one of the strong ones! Keep getting up! I know this world.

thank you dearest Xmar I will keep doing just that I deeply cherish your thoughts & visits.. love Brenda