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calm, stoic stares
no time for cliche'
ridden [poetic] verse
neither for
expectations
perverse
calm, stoic stares
deep breaths
shall do
Published 21st Jun 2017
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21st Jun 2017 6:21pm
21st Jun 2017 7:27pm
:-)
communication is universal. words are but imperfect tools.
Appreciation.
communication is universal. words are but imperfect tools.
Appreciation.
And then the ideas might flow. I can imagine the person depicted, acting a little like Pink Floyd's Rick Wight, the way he appears to be, behind the keyboards. This is a nice little poem, seeming saying nothing but in fact, stating or capturing a moment in time, a reasoning or revelation even. Love it.
22nd Jun 2017 3:31pm
:-)
Thank you.
Finding appreciation with such depth is a matter of pleasure.
The need to say something, means not all was communicated, perhaps due to insufficient level of connection. Words are secondary deployment of message, when the primary and superior mode has failed to deliver.
:-) welcome :-)
Thank you.
Finding appreciation with such depth is a matter of pleasure.
The need to say something, means not all was communicated, perhaps due to insufficient level of connection. Words are secondary deployment of message, when the primary and superior mode has failed to deliver.
:-) welcome :-)
