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~Katja within the notes~
within the vodka notes
you came to me
& left your tiny hand prints
on my spirit
~*~
stained with the color of pain
you revealed yourself to me
naked & pure of soul
i weep for the beauty of it
~*~
i can't escape
the feeling of melancholy
that has taken hold
after touching divinity
in the flesh
~*~
you always dance just out of reach
i touched heaven
when you reached in
then tasted hell
after you withdrew
~*~
beautiful one with the tainted lips
sorrow in your eyes
i see past the cum soaked hollows
~*~
into fathomless depths
that would drown any mortal
foolish enough to take lightly
the magnitude of your breath
you breathe & the world awakens
~*~
within the vodka notes I met you
& i will never be the same
*for the beautiful Earth_Child with all my love
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
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crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 10th Jun 2017
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Re. ~Katja within the notes~
10th Jun 2017 7:53pm
Stellar inking!! Beautiful from the heart piece dedicated to our poetess laureate!
Brava my dear Crim... :)
Brava my dear Crim... :)
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10th Jun 2017 8:14pm
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
10th Jun 2017 8:04pm
brenda, you are the sister of my soul
your strength & courage have often been a driving force to stay true to myself when i feel like giving in to my own demons.
i will treasure this & the creative experience
love you madly
xoxoxo
your strength & courage have often been a driving force to stay true to myself when i feel like giving in to my own demons.
i will treasure this & the creative experience
love you madly
xoxoxo
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Re: Re. ~Katja within the notes~
beautiful one thank you I'm elated you were happy with my offering
I was so moved by creating with you that I had to write about the experience
you give me hope today that we can face our demons even if we have to pick ourselves up off the floor daily
I love you deeply
xo Brenda
I was so moved by creating with you that I had to write about the experience
you give me hope today that we can face our demons even if we have to pick ourselves up off the floor daily
I love you deeply
xo Brenda
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
10th Jun 2017 8:39pm
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 9:17pm
Beautiful
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11th Jun 2017 3:00am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 9:21pm
Brenda.. gotta agree with the boss.. it should be against the law.. to write such perfection.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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11th Jun 2017 3:01am
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
10th Jun 2017 9:53pm
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11th Jun 2017 3:02am
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
11th Jun 2017 3:24am
Dear Crim, I wish I had the words for a comment, but I don't...
This piece left me speechless... it's beautiful!
Love, Duende
This piece left me speechless... it's beautiful!
Love, Duende
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11th Jun 2017 4:43am
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2017 4:12am
My Beautiful Brenda...this loving and heartfelt tribute to our lovely Katja stole my breath. Each line delicately placed and executed with such loving thought and emotion...admiration and respect...stunning...
I love you eternally...
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you eternally...
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. ~Katja within the notes~
11th Jun 2017 4:45am
thank you my love I'm so happy you see this write as it was intended to be.. I deeply appreciate the love you show me.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
11th Jun 2017 1:32pm
this is amazingly heartfelt, Crim;
we read it & somehow thru the armor
that the mean streets have barricaded us with
we are touched...
we read it & somehow thru the armor
that the mean streets have barricaded us with
we are touched...
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Re. ~Katja within the notes~
Anonymous
11th Jun 2017 2:34pm
A beautiful tribute to the breathtaking Earth_Child. I'm always blessed when she dances across my pages. Just as I'm delighted when my lovely Angel graces mine. Much love to you both...
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Re: Re. ~Katja within the notes~
11th Jun 2017 3:37pm
thank you lovely one I cherish & am blessed by her as well..
I adore & look forward to your visits on my pages..
love you lady..
xo Crim
I adore & look forward to your visits on my pages..
love you lady..
xo Crim
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
11th Jun 2017 6:20pm
Vulnerability, a nakedness beyond nudity, lays down tracks that memory can follow even in the dark....it's right here.
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11th Jun 2017 6:42pm
Re. ~Katja within the notes~
11th Jun 2017 8:27pm
such a beautiful write, such passion I am astounded, you are such a poet :-)
you inspire me :-)
you inspire me :-)
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thank you David most graciously for such a beautiful comment..
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2017 10:35pm
Stunning ...
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16th Jun 2017 00:05am
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