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masochistic whore
you want me rough & raw
a masochistic whore
who takes a beat down
then spits in your face
just so I can bring out
the Sadistic beast in you
piss down my throat
drown my demons
in your vile hate for me
the emo part of my being
that you despise
I take pleasure in the knowledge
you will shit on my grave
when my days are done
vodka gave me a will of steel
you could beat me but not break me
now I am wilted flowers baking in the sun
bring on the darkness motherfucker
I thrive there
thrash the evil from my flesh
flail me within an inch of my life
in your Sadistic care
I found my salvation
taking communion from your cock
when you spilled
your demented seed deep inside me
I have a pussy with teeth
just know they will
leave a permanent mark
on your blackened soul
so come at me with your worst
or i'll leave your limp dick in the dirt
with all the others
who thought they could tame this cunt
you bring the vodka
& i'll bring the devil
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
a masochistic whore
who takes a beat down
then spits in your face
just so I can bring out
the Sadistic beast in you
piss down my throat
drown my demons
in your vile hate for me
the emo part of my being
that you despise
I take pleasure in the knowledge
you will shit on my grave
when my days are done
vodka gave me a will of steel
you could beat me but not break me
now I am wilted flowers baking in the sun
bring on the darkness motherfucker
I thrive there
thrash the evil from my flesh
flail me within an inch of my life
in your Sadistic care
I found my salvation
taking communion from your cock
when you spilled
your demented seed deep inside me
I have a pussy with teeth
just know they will
leave a permanent mark
on your blackened soul
so come at me with your worst
or i'll leave your limp dick in the dirt
with all the others
who thought they could tame this cunt
you bring the vodka
& i'll bring the devil
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 10th Jun 2017
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10th Jun 2017 1:40pm
take that PS! haha love the in-tenssse whoopin' sistah. now that is some dark pome..kick-ass pome.
10th Jun 2017 1:55pm
10th Jun 2017 1:41pm
I'll be the first to break you
My cum will be your mouthwash
You're my fucking cunt whore princess
Literary ass fuck begging for more
It's in public now
Bleed
Like
My cum will be your mouthwash
You're my fucking cunt whore princess
Literary ass fuck begging for more
It's in public now
Bleed
Like
10th Jun 2017 1:57pm
thank you Sadistic Poet for breathing the life back into me with your public backhand.. love you.. xx Brenda
10th Jun 2017 1:51pm
"you bring the vodka
&I'll bring the devil"
who could resist such an offer?
Kick-ass poem. The epitome of a masochist, right there.
Respect
&I'll bring the devil"
who could resist such an offer?
Kick-ass poem. The epitome of a masochist, right there.
Respect
10th Jun 2017 1:57pm
Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 2:11pm
This is fucking hard core hot !!
10th Jun 2017 4:41pm
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10th Jun 2017 4:42pm
Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 2:18pm
a moment of silence for the amazingness that is having your mouth used as a urinal.
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righty-oh
masochist stamp of approval all over this, brenda.
you had me squirming in my seat.
vodka and a change of nickers ltm
love ya lady
xxxxxx
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righty-oh
masochist stamp of approval all over this, brenda.
you had me squirming in my seat.
vodka and a change of nickers ltm
love ya lady
xxxxxx
10th Jun 2017 4:42pm
thank you beautiful one I love & cherish your thoughts.. love you lady.. xx Brenda
10th Jun 2017 3:00pm
"I have a pussy with teeth" > that line was a pleasant surprise (lol)
Love this one, but you know that already...
Damn lady, you're on a poetic roll lately... keep them coming!
Love, Duende
Love this one, but you know that already...
Damn lady, you're on a poetic roll lately... keep them coming!
Love, Duende
10th Jun 2017 4:43pm
10th Jun 2017 3:07pm
Brenda.. you're truly brilliant.. this kicks ass on all levels.. love you..
Dave
Dave
10th Jun 2017 4:44pm
10th Jun 2017 10:03pm
11th Jun 2017 4:29am
Anonymous
11th Jun 2017 4:04am
My Beautiful Brenda is fired up and leaving an endless trail to clean up...words which wield cutting in and leaving blood dripping from that gorgeous mouth! My love, this is simply outstanding and I am grrrrrr'ing because I am unable to RL this right now...but it will be going in as soon as it can! I'm keeping a running tab for you and others that are must haves!
I love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
11th Jun 2017 4:31am
thank you my love I am so elated at your reaction to this write.. over the moon happy.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Anonymous
11th Jun 2017 2:23pm
Well, this is certainly a combustible piece! And that was one helluva solid landing! Lovely Angel, bringing your fire to the party again, I see. Much love...
thank you lovely one for such a wonderful comment :)
I love you lady..
xo Crim
I love you lady..
xo Crim
11th Jun 2017 8:18pm
thank you David no lol this was a very dark erotic ;)
you gave me a giggle with your comment :)
love Brenda
you gave me a giggle with your comment :)
love Brenda
13th Jun 2017 2:30pm
