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Amnesia

emotions' quicksand
buried in oblivion
relieving the pain

Written by applepie77

Published 8th Jun 2017

#haiku #memories

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Re. Amnesia

9th Jun 2017 1:34pm

some say there is no forgetting,
yet it's attractive poetry...

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Re. Amnesia

21st Jun 2017 3:24pm

Palpatable pain
Oblivion not granted
Emotions for sale

I feel you .. And like how you phrase the emotions.

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Anonymous

19th Aug 2017 10:23am

Fabulous

Re. Amnesia

15th Aug 2018 10:33pm

This is brilliant! Your haiku perfectly explains what amnesia is.

Nice work!

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