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the delivery
a poem
is but a bunch
of words hangin' out
that's what is
obviously observed
them hangin out
said emily*
is democratic
what ever it is
it is
the sum of their whole
rather than
the hole of their sum
is what actually
makes that bunch
a poem
what they deliver
how they deliver
matters
but not that much
that
it delivers
those emotions
those effects
those personal effects
we all carry
in the pockets
called
our hearts
after all
poetry is
but stains on paper
and
on some
heart
is but a bunch
of words hangin' out
that's what is
obviously observed
them hangin out
said emily*
is democratic
what ever it is
it is
the sum of their whole
rather than
the hole of their sum
is what actually
makes that bunch
a poem
what they deliver
how they deliver
matters
but not that much
that
it delivers
those emotions
those effects
those personal effects
we all carry
in the pockets
called
our hearts
after all
poetry is
but stains on paper
and
on some
heart
Published 8th Jun 2017
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8th Jun 2017 6:29pm
Walker you have a beautiful mind & heart..
you affect me in a good way :)
love Crim
you affect me in a good way :)
love Crim
9th Jun 2017 9:11am
you forgot to mention i also got a beautiful sistah with betta attributes than mine. and you helpin me in a greater way. luv ya so much. walker
8th Jun 2017 10:50pm
9th Jun 2017 9:12am
9th Jun 2017 4:55am
Great write, walker! If I could have awarded another trophy, I would have given it for this entry.
9th Jun 2017 9:13am
fizzle ma man, ya poetry is one o da most impressive a found and ya made me happy wid ya praise. TQ muchly dear pal.
Anonymous
9th Jun 2017 5:18am
ah see you're building a rickety house, don't matter tho as long as it keeps you warm
i adore the way your mind worked here
xx
i adore the way your mind worked here
xx
9th Jun 2017 9:10am
rickety or not, the house neva became home, but the bonfire of the stuff the old stuf called memories and sentiments did help keep warm durin the stay. luv ya Kat. TQ v much for the add and adoration. wish ma poetry was as adorable as ya one! XXX
11th Jun 2017 7:15pm
a great explanation of what poetry is to you :-)
Love the hearts as pockets :-)
Love the hearts as pockets :-)
12th Jun 2017 11:41am
ya hit the bull on its balls there pal, this is exactly what poetry means ta me. yes, our hearts are pockets aren't they, for they keep those special effects we never let go for the rest of our lives. TQ ma man for so much love. Luv ya ma brotha.
