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Beauty in the Dark
He sits alone at a road-side bar n grill
lost in thought waiting for
a last-call thrill
mentally malnourished
he’s in search of a cunt
he can eat on her rag
he will eat her alive,
he will—
at last, a drugged out stripper
passes by his table
offering a lingering smirk
he gets up to follow
his mental disorder
picks up the tab
Signed Vlad
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 6th Jun 2017
| Edited 6th Jun 2022
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Re. Beauty in the Dark
6th Jun 2017 6:35pm
Bipolar pays the bills. This one's like a little bomb going off from the ultimate in femmes fatales. Beautiful job as darkness falls...
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Re: Re. Beauty in the Dark
6th Jun 2017 8:19pm
laffs, thanks Crow you sweet man you! i truly appreciate your support. Of course you already know that :) love Zazzles xoxo
Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 9:21am
powerful images dance in my mind reading this lovely Jackie..
raw, hard edged & bloody fantastic!
love Brenda
raw, hard edged & bloody fantastic!
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 4:18pm
lol Brenda, yes it is bloody fantastic i'll say.... *giggles* loves you Sis xoxox Jackie Xo
Re. Beauty in the Dark
Anonymous
7th Jun 2017 1:12pm
Freakin Awesome ....... there's so much in there ......shit is serious! :)
All the best as always
Ben
All the best as always
Ben
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Re: Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 4:12pm
Good morning Ben lol glad u enjoyed. Yeah this one came out of left field.. I like when that happens Cheers! Zazzles
Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 4:07pm
Definitely dark, but "who gives a fuck?"
The mere mention of cunt n eating made me hungry! lol... excellent inking my dear!
The mere mention of cunt n eating made me hungry! lol... excellent inking my dear!
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Re: Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 4:13pm
lmao! Po! hahaha you neva know eh? w00t w00t! loves you Bro xoxoxox Broomie Xoxox
Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 7:02pm
ouchy! - But then I appreciate "not giving a fuck" - that takes commitment :-p
excellent and powerful write :-)
excellent and powerful write :-)
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Re: Re. Beauty in the Dark
7th Jun 2017 11:07pm
Re. Beauty in the Dark
Anonymous
8th Jun 2017 4:54am
My Dearest Jackie...this brought me huge giggles...I'm at my horniest when the bitch shows up...
Loves you
xoxo Tata
Loves you
xoxo Tata
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Re: Re. Beauty in the Dark
8th Jun 2017 6:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
11th Jun 2017 7:24am
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12th Jun 2017 1:42am