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Poetess
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I will die 10,000 deaths and 10,000 times more before I give up my freedom of speech, poetry is my sanctuary and my sense of peace my go-to place when I'm feeling out of sorts my personal unlimited outreach source
Do with me what you will, but I will write with my black feathered quill till the bitter end, while l can and, I won't go quietly undeniably with my heart on my sleeve for all to read
No! I won't just lay down and die, and I, I will write until my hands bleed until my fingers show bone
until my blood rains heavy at my feet and I die alone.
Poetry or Death? You Ask?
I choose death....
Please listen while reading, thanks
I will die 10,000 deaths and 10,000 times more before I give up my freedom of speech, poetry is my sanctuary and my sense of peace my go-to place when I'm feeling out of sorts my personal unlimited outreach source
Do with me what you will, but I will write with my black feathered quill till the bitter end, while l can and, I won't go quietly undeniably with my heart on my sleeve for all to read
No! I won't just lay down and die, and I, I will write until my hands bleed until my fingers show bone
until my blood rains heavy at my feet and I die alone.
Poetry or Death? You Ask?
I choose death....
Published 30th May 2017
| Edited 21st Jan 2021
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Anonymous
30th May 2017 6:43pm
Truth!
31st May 2017 2:58pm
30th May 2017 8:58pm
I love your defiant tone here Jackie. You have every reason to be proud. Your writes blaze and take no quarter. You're both a poet and warrior, seems to me. Fine work!
30th May 2017 9:32pm
I have to tell you your comments are the best I just adore you and your loyal support ... thank you for all your kind words over the years Thomas! Always Zazzles
30th May 2017 10:44pm
31st May 2017 3:00pm
Yup that's the point eh? this is a poem entry in the Poetry or Death Comp :) ((((((((((((((((((((((Poe)))))))))))))))))))))) Zazzles xoxo
31st May 2017 1:08am
Oh hell yea!! I'm right there with you Broomie!! I'd die die before I give up poetry ...!
31st May 2017 3:01pm
High five Po!!!! ^5 always a pleasure to see you here, have a great day! loves you Broomie xoxox
Anonymous
31st May 2017 4:06am
My Dearest Jackie....packing one helluva punch with this one sis! I know without your words you would crumble into nothingness and your ability to wield words is clearly evident here! A most excellent piece! Best of luck in the comp!
Loves you
xoxoxoxxo
Tata
Loves you
xoxoxoxxo
Tata
31st May 2017 3:03pm
Hey hey so nice to see you little Sis, it's been a minute this must be good if you added it in your list! Thanks Jackie xoxoxox (((((((((((((((((((((((((((willow)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
31st May 2017 7:34pm
WoW! this is special - so special I wish I had written it - and currently its how I feel - this one is an easy add
:-)
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1st Jun 2017 12:06pm
Well thank you my hard rocking amigo! And thank you for the list!!! ((((((((((((((David))))))))))))))))))) love Zazzles Xxxx
3rd Jun 2017 11:01am
3rd Jun 2017 3:30pm
Anonymous
5th Jun 2017 8:21am
Thank you for add Zazzy Lady, and must say
that this is one my favs from you..
ive read some of your older ones but here i sense
a great maturity in your poetry and it's beautiful,
only things like this happen when we are fruitful
love it!
that this is one my favs from you..
ive read some of your older ones but here i sense
a great maturity in your poetry and it's beautiful,
only things like this happen when we are fruitful
love it!
6th Jun 2017 00:12am
Hello. nice to meet you :) thanks for coming to my page and reading from me it's always nice to know people feel your words... BTW I am now just getting into your poetry, my little sister Taryn found u first :) looking forward to discovering more about that beautiful mind of yours... Zazzles Xx
8th Jun 2017 4:41am
I saw this yesterday in the comp... I also saw something about being a pathological editor, well... that makes two of us!
Having said that... I can see you put a lot of thought in this poem, worked on it till it was perfect and perfect it is!
Outstanding write, Jackie!
Hugs, Duende xXx
P.S. I hope I remembered the word "pathological" correctly...
Having said that... I can see you put a lot of thought in this poem, worked on it till it was perfect and perfect it is!
Outstanding write, Jackie!
Hugs, Duende xXx
P.S. I hope I remembered the word "pathological" correctly...
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