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Hardened
Wind weathered dream severed
eyes hollow stare blankly out
rough seas washed away hopes
hardened hearts die
fragile souls cry
hastily built walls
stones tumble
broken in a blackened sky
masses filter the catacombs
steeple's raise notice
dropping down
suddenly lost
eyes hollow stare blankly out
rough seas washed away hopes
hardened hearts die
fragile souls cry
hastily built walls
stones tumble
broken in a blackened sky
masses filter the catacombs
steeple's raise notice
dropping down
suddenly lost
Published 28th May 2017
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28th May 2017 7:26pm
A dark and desolate place where
hearts go to die.
Images that overpower
with a beauty that makes
them almost invisible.
Nicely done...
hearts go to die.
Images that overpower
with a beauty that makes
them almost invisible.
Nicely done...
Anonymous
28th May 2017 11:28pm
"rough seas washed away hopes
hardened hearts die
fragile souls cry "
Love these lines fella, awesome.
hardened hearts die
fragile souls cry "
Love these lines fella, awesome.
Anonymous
29th May 2017 00:50am
The ache of this one feels a bit like the abrasion of wind blasted sand against vulnerable flesh. Hugs, Tim
