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drenched

drenched in sepia

beneath rings of spilt ale

memories won't fade

Written by JusTim_

Published 29th May 2017

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Re. drenched

Anonymous

30th May 2017 1:50pm

The clinging ones are the hardest.

Re. drenched

31st May 2017 2:13pm

o O this is a powerfully emotive Haiku, Tim. The remembering is palpable, and sometimes it feels unending.

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