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Lust
Kiss, deep wet
long
passionate
Touch, soft hard
stroking
arousal
Blood, hot red
throbbing
powerful
Sex, slow fast
thrusting
coming
Sated, gentle sleepy
loving
holding
long
passionate
Touch, soft hard
stroking
arousal
Blood, hot red
throbbing
powerful
Sex, slow fast
thrusting
coming
Sated, gentle sleepy
loving
holding
Published 28th Aug 2011
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28th Aug 2011 7:50pm
28th Aug 2011 8:52pm
This has an intoxicating flow. You have a sensual soul that transfers the words surging through your veins into pooms that make inquirering minds want to know... moooorrre!
Anonymous
29th Aug 2011 2:54pm
miladyelfn,
What a great (erotic) picture book you've opened in our minds!
tornado
What a great (erotic) picture book you've opened in our minds!
tornado
6th Feb 2012 5:18pm
It's as though each line, each word, is a snapshot or another scene in a fond flashback.
So little yet so much, it's incredible.
So little yet so much, it's incredible.
