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walk
walk
when ya heart's an explosion
walk
when ya know it's not confusion
walk
when the glory's bowing to ya
walk
when world's staring at ya
walk
when ya know that you can fuck'em
walk
when ya know that it ain't ova
walk
when the deal is a corruption
walk
when walkin's not an option
walk
when ya heart's an explosion
walk
when ya know it's not confusion
walk
when the glory's bowing to ya
walk
when world's staring at ya
walk
when ya know that you can fuck'em
walk
when ya know that it ain't ova
walk
when the deal is a corruption
walk
when walkin's not an option
walk
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Re. walk
22nd May 2017 9:04am
this is great Walker I'm going to keep walking I hear the message of this write loud and clear thank you..
love Crimisn
love Crimisn
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Re: Re. walk
22nd May 2017 9:07am
thannxx fo' joinin in sistah! we walk our own walks...know ya've walked tougher roads..a say keep marchin sistah and don' forget ta wave when ya pass by this walker ;-)
Re. walk
22nd May 2017 10:56am
This actually had me playing music in my head to the steady beat of "walk"...a short, but very strong message...nicely done bro!
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Re: Re. walk
22nd May 2017 11:02am
ma man! ya made ma day brotha! i'll keep this comment close for it is from a poet a been admirin! loved ya came a visitin me brotha!! TQ v much sir!
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Re: Re. walk
22nd May 2017 2:23pm
that's what's keepn me alive sista! and thnx for da company an comin' along! luv ya
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Re. walk
7th Jun 2017 5:24pm
"when ya know that you can fuck'em "
That's it. Enjoyed that one, nice structure
That's it. Enjoyed that one, nice structure
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