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Virus
You say you love me
But you're a virus and
You're infecting all of me
I'll shut down
To escape your torment
In the dark i'm
No longer alone
You always find a way
To violate my happiness
You're always
murdering my joy
But this time
I won't let you
Been good for
Quite a while
And now you come to
Corrupt all i am
I'll self destruct before
I can ever be yours
Fuck your plans
I'm not some object
You can pay for
My firewall is up
And you'll never come through
Unless i want you too
But you're a virus and
You're infecting all of me
I'll shut down
To escape your torment
In the dark i'm
No longer alone
You always find a way
To violate my happiness
You're always
murdering my joy
But this time
I won't let you
Been good for
Quite a while
And now you come to
Corrupt all i am
I'll self destruct before
I can ever be yours
Fuck your plans
I'm not some object
You can pay for
My firewall is up
And you'll never come through
Unless i want you too
Published 28th Aug 2011
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28th Aug 2011 3:46am
I like the computer metaphor, but I feel you could develop it even more. Use of the word "Fuck" (and I LOVE the word) seems unnecessary-- doesn't fit. Last line, "too" should be "to"-- I'm OCD about grammar, though.
Anonymous
29th Aug 2011 6:59pm
beautiful work. very distructive and feelin lotta anger, but still beautiful :)
