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Secrets
Whisper to me your secrets
I open myself to your sin
your low voice slithers around my skin
I am at your mercy
give your secrets to me
lips upon lips
bound by lies that mean nothing
Set your soul free
release yourself to me
all your dirty little secrets
You no longer need to hide
within the deep shadows of shame
let me kill all of your pain
with one very long
hot deep kiss
containing
of all
your
darkest
secrets...
I open myself to your sin
your low voice slithers around my skin
I am at your mercy
give your secrets to me
lips upon lips
bound by lies that mean nothing
Set your soul free
release yourself to me
all your dirty little secrets
You no longer need to hide
within the deep shadows of shame
let me kill all of your pain
with one very long
hot deep kiss
containing
of all
your
darkest
secrets...
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Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 4:03am
Mysterious One I feel safe in your embrace I will release my secrets to you on the page knowing you will keep them guarded and safe..
beautiful write..
love Crim
beautiful write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 4:09am
Never to reveal to anyone what I know, not even the Devil himself. I will die with your secrets safe, love. <3
Re. Secrets
Anonymous
19th May 2017 10:29am
Amazing write. seriously amazing.
That is all.
Ben
That is all.
Ben
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Re: Re. Secrets
20th May 2017 7:26pm
Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 11:25am
sexy & smoky, emerging from between darkened lips;
a kiss has no secrets...
a kiss has no secrets...
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Re: Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 2:35pm
Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 12:45pm
My secrets are safe with me. I trust no one that is not me...
Loved the write A! Almost had me whispering them to you...
JJ
Loved the write A! Almost had me whispering them to you...
JJ
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Re: Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 2:35pm
JJ, I would hold them close and never let them go, only to to return to you some of my own...<3
Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 2:40pm
Re. Secrets
19th May 2017 6:11pm
I like your way of dealing with secrets better than my own, but some secrets are better taken to the grave :-)
this is a beautiful poem and thought :-)
this is a beautiful poem and thought :-)
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20th May 2017 7:28pm