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Her
5'5 with the wide eyes and the nice thighs that graze me
with blonde hair and the long stare who belongs where I'm laying
I can't help, but feel held, by god himself, around her
No anger, no danger, she's a banger, no flounder
One day, I'm gonna make her my wife
This one I wanna keep with me for life
No drug, no such greater feeling
Everything I do has greater meaning
Everything we make is love, not war
no more, do I feel poor, or need more
I need her as much as I could ever want her
what more could I ever possibly need
with blonde hair and the long stare who belongs where I'm laying
I can't help, but feel held, by god himself, around her
No anger, no danger, she's a banger, no flounder
One day, I'm gonna make her my wife
This one I wanna keep with me for life
No drug, no such greater feeling
Everything I do has greater meaning
Everything we make is love, not war
no more, do I feel poor, or need more
I need her as much as I could ever want her
what more could I ever possibly need
Published 18th May 2017
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18th May 2017 10:16pm
right i have to say the first bit was FIRE! like omgosh if you were to of kept going like that it would of been like a hiphop rap :P good stuff!
"5'5 with the wide eyes and the nice thighs that graze me
with blonde hair and the long stare who belongs where I'm laying"
"5'5 with the wide eyes and the nice thighs that graze me
with blonde hair and the long stare who belongs where I'm laying"
20th May 2017 9:28pm
Thank you, it was written to be a rap, but I said everything I needed to say in the short verse, so this might be used as a skit or intro. I appreciate the comment a lot
