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"YOUR OWN ALONE"
Caught up in
"YOUR OWN ALONE MOMENT"
that's not how life should be
That's what's wrong with our
"Society"
Alternatives to real intimacy
"CLOSE OFF THE MIND TO REALITY"
theres your gateway to
"SELF GRATIFICATION"
it gets you off
but still doesn't
improve a situation.
Many ride along in this life
"SINGING A CLOSED MIND SONG"
Thinking the thought alone
is just that
"Doesn't Make It Wrong"
Doing the deed in your head
Isn't the same as rolling around
"IN THE BED"
The Thought or The Act
both are the same
Longing to fulfill this
'Hole'
in my reality!
Yet still I see
"NO ONE CAN SING MY
SONG QUITE LIKE ME"
Naomi Ferrell
May 11, 2017
"YOUR OWN ALONE MOMENT"
that's not how life should be
That's what's wrong with our
"Society"
Alternatives to real intimacy
"CLOSE OFF THE MIND TO REALITY"
theres your gateway to
"SELF GRATIFICATION"
it gets you off
but still doesn't
improve a situation.
Many ride along in this life
"SINGING A CLOSED MIND SONG"
Thinking the thought alone
is just that
"Doesn't Make It Wrong"
Doing the deed in your head
Isn't the same as rolling around
"IN THE BED"
The Thought or The Act
both are the same
Longing to fulfill this
'Hole'
in my reality!
Yet still I see
"NO ONE CAN SING MY
SONG QUITE LIKE ME"
Naomi Ferrell
May 11, 2017
Published 12th May 2017
| Edited 24th Jun 2017
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12th May 2017 00:41am
I truly agree, fantasy can't replace the real thing... yet for some of us, it's all we can do to keep ourselves half sane! lol...
Def. Feel u though...
Def. Feel u though...
12th May 2017 00:56am
Agreed & I feel the same.. I am one to "respect" relationships of others. I quite often find "myself" being "woo'ed" by one who's attached, yet not happy! Or allowing their relationship to 'Reside' even tho they are the one being "denied". My attempt, my search for "My One" seems to go in circles. Sometimes around "this particular need". I can't, I don't cross those lines. Its a matter of self respect & respect for others involved. That's actually "how this write came to be"! I don't want to be or to feel used by someone in "a tied down situation". Its happened before, tho I didn't kno because they lied. Opening ones self up to "a false pride" is just as destructive as taking the "ride". Even tho it may be out of the " one whom had been "lied to's' control...
12th May 2017 3:50am
Nice poem, FlameOfFire, you speak a song that many can relate to and present in a very artistic and thoughtful way.
Original and well-written words. Well done
Original and well-written words. Well done
