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Forget The Family Silver
I wrote a dozen poems
in my head
On the walk to the shops, through
hills , birdsongs and dancing ponies
I mused on the state of society
Bemoaned the baby boomers for selling children's futures
All for what
a cabinet of tiny trinkets?
Then
I came back to you
How you make me laugh and feel happy
Our little trinity of life
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Re. Forget The Family Silver
6th May 2017 11:37am
Sometimes it's better to stay home.
I can feel the light in this Fine Write-Excellence as Always Cape!!!
I can feel the light in this Fine Write-Excellence as Always Cape!!!
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9th May 2017 9:22pm
Re. Forget The Family Silver
6th May 2017 12:19pm
Good on ya Mate!! this made me smile from heart!! Chersihing the blessings..a very greatful Dad/Partner and more, indeed!! Blessed be!!
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Re. Forget The Family Silver
6th May 2017 3:49pm
so very heartwarming and beautiful makes me smile wide at the thought of your happy family :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re. Forget The Family Silver
7th May 2017 00:28am
I could picture this as a scene from a movie, watching you mull over things, and find that there really is no place like home. Great job, well done!
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