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Young Love
Where you cognizant that you loved me,
And of your love was I aware?
Young love can happen when you're old,
Consume you like purified air.
Destiny, like wind to your back,
Pushes you onward, n'er to end.
Once in a while I see you pass,
I've kept your secret my good friend.
ŠApril 21, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
And of your love was I aware?
Young love can happen when you're old,
Consume you like purified air.
Destiny, like wind to your back,
Pushes you onward, n'er to end.
Once in a while I see you pass,
I've kept your secret my good friend.
ŠApril 21, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 2nd May 2017
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3rd May 2017 3:10pm
3rd May 2017 3:26pm
Thank you muchly, Brenda, your thoughts always give me a good feeling.
3rd May 2017 10:11pm
Echo crimson. Your line "Young love can happen when you're old" reminds me of the Frank Sinatra song "If you're young at heart".
3rd May 2017 10:15pm
4th May 2017 2:18am
Hey Jerry.......short write for you but powerfully thought provoking.......a little bit of mysteriousness to it......I like that.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th May 2017 3:37am
Thank you, flower, for liking my poem and commenting on it. I really wasn't trying to be mysterious, but if that caught your eye, happy that it did.
