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Villanelle Nr.06 — Motivational Speaker (A NaPo-2017 Day-31 bonus villanelle)
The speaker pranced across the stage
with ‘carpe diems’ on his lips
the listeners clapped entranced, amazed
a preacher’s son, yep, born and raised
he knew the form of rhetoric
the speaker pranced across the stage
and pumped the spell-bound tribe half-crazed
to swallow their apprenticeship
the listeners clapped entranced, amazed
and starry-eyed half in a daze
they punched the air and let it rip
the speaker pranced across the stage
and midst the giant screen ablaze
with goals achieved … the speaker slipped -
the listeners crapped entranced, amazed
but falling flat was quite unfazed
sprang up at once and got a grip:
the speaker pranced across the stage
the listeners clapped entranced, amazed.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 1st May 2017
| Edited 7th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Villanelle Nr.07 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/290039-tittle-and-jot/
Villanelle Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/269451-easter-sunday-revisited/
(photo credit: sead-dedic-ie-9chgWE_4-unsplash)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/290039-tittle-and-jot/
Villanelle Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/269451-easter-sunday-revisited/
(photo credit: sead-dedic-ie-9chgWE_4-unsplash)
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Re: Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
1st May 2017 2:04pm
Thank you whale, your comment has given me a lunchtime boost to motivate me through the afternoon. Thank you.
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1st May 2017 2:01pm
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1st May 2017 2:06pm
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1st May 2017 8:58pm
Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
Anonymous
1st May 2017 2:32pm
Oh the memories this brought back...! My parents used to take us to see speakers like this as kids and I remember just this sort of speaker from many a dais. Were it not for the charisma and energy, I would surely have fallen asleep. To this day, I can't remember their topics though. Well written! Loved when he slipped and the audience laughed. Made me laugh

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Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
1st May 2017 4:08pm
Hi Ash, glad it made you laugh; laughing helps wind down the tension after a focussed intensive time. :)
... inspired by straight-down-the-line preacher-teacher-speaker experience.
... inspired by straight-down-the-line preacher-teacher-speaker experience.
Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
1st May 2017 5:45pm
the listeners crapped... (penultimate verse)
which must have had 'em
rolling in the piles,
aisle be bound ...
which must have had 'em
rolling in the piles,
aisle be bound ...
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1st May 2017 6:24pm
Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
1st May 2017 7:54pm
I love this.. being a PK, I can relate .. also immediately brought Sam Kinison to mind, who I miss terribly ...
Thanks for the memories
Thanks for the memories
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1st May 2017 8:57pm
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1st May 2017 9:05pm
Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
2nd May 2017 7:48pm
an excellent piece - the quality of your NAPO entries has been astounding - quantity and quality, congratulations :-)
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Re: Re. Motivational Speaker (A NaPoWriMo Day-31 bonus villanelle)
2nd May 2017 9:48pm
Thank you for the complement - my brain configuration is now slowly 'de-villanelling' itself. Am looking forward to writing something different ... until the next one.