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Not Near
The messages left
Within
Signal continuously
Of the space you are in
A constant reminder
That you are no longer near
Within
Signal continuously
Of the space you are in
A constant reminder
That you are no longer near
Published 26th Apr 2017
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26th Apr 2017 10:42am
Distance makes the heart grow fonder... I believe that if something is meant to be, then it shall come to pass. When someone is loved and 'not near', does feelings suffice in their absence? This is a remarkable piece and what courage you have to post it boldly. Thank you.
27th Apr 2017 9:26am
Thank you for your eloquent feedback! I do think the feelings suffice as you say. But, that is a personal opinion and might not be shared by others :)
