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catch me never
I'm clairvoyant to your billionaire lips
the hoax is your tongue
against my starfish lifelines
you burn me with moonbeams
you're a swindler, a lord
chalk fresh and glitter warmth
I'm the fumbling rebel
the fizz when the rain
falls against my heated flesh
i am ever the escapist
your ambush is futile
the loophole in my metal
bears your faltering fingerprints
i predict you a night under a felon sky
a well wish before I leave
earth man, with saline coated lashes
you were accidental
and I don't want to stay in your glow
you may just take my breath
crush my violet divide
pull me into your quicksand
you debonair bloke
suspended from my hip sway
ceaseless guru, invading my chakra
a thief, trying to break my code
I'm the architect of my internal structure
it's my magic, my fortress
I feel your fervour
trying to puncture my life force
pedestrian of the fashionable abstract
preaching your brainstorms
to my twisted tumour
my isolation
is a carriage of implications
a tribute to the dignity
i glued to my battle flag
there is a fee for acceptance
you peddle the hunt, but i am just a ghost
a motion picture projected through your eyes
(I've added another stanza since creating the audio, hence it is not part of the audio)
Written by
Magdalena
(Spartalena)
Published 18th Apr 2017
| Edited 26th Apr 2017
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Re. catch me never
18th Apr 2017 1:18am
Some of the imagery in this is striking, Magdalena.
'chalk fresh and glitter warmth'
'saline coated lashes'
Some like it hot; some like it perfectly warm, just in the moment and no more...
Well done. Would love to hear you read this one.
One thing, the form seems different for you. I'm not saying that's a bad thing.
'chalk fresh and glitter warmth'
'saline coated lashes'
Some like it hot; some like it perfectly warm, just in the moment and no more...
Well done. Would love to hear you read this one.
One thing, the form seems different for you. I'm not saying that's a bad thing.
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Re: Re. catch me never
18th Apr 2017 8:25am
Thank you very much Ahavati. The structure will probably change, I want to also chop this, add to this. When I have some me time I shall look at it again. I put it here and on FB so that I don't forget about it lol. Much appreciated. :)
Re: Re. catch me never
20th Apr 2017 4:19pm
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20th Apr 2017 4:50pm
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20th Apr 2017 4:55pm
Re: Re. catch me never
20th Apr 2017 5:44pm
Re. catch me never
You are intense n magdalenian as ever, my poetess...this working progress will refine further. But i like this as such...
Will come back again for adding my words dear...u tc , n try to write more. I know how the days are.
btw the title is impactful
Will come back again for adding my words dear...u tc , n try to write more. I know how the days are.
btw the title is impactful
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Re: Re. catch me never
18th Apr 2017 9:40pm
Thank you lovely lady. I always love to see you here. The title came from me running away from any potential relationships in Wales and no longer giving any online relationships a chance. I become more impossible to catch as the years slip by. I don't know if that is a sad thing or not. :) x
Re: Re. catch me never
24th May 2019 5:41am
Ah the addition only makes it more finesse diamond-ine, magdalenian poetess. I hear you .. i see feel the emphasis of your burning words ur firing poetry. thanks for digging this power write back..
you inspire as ev my adored one! xx
you inspire as ev my adored one! xx
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Re. catch me never
20th Apr 2017 8:53pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9567/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
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Re: Re. catch me never
2nd May 2017 11:37am
Re. catch me never
21st Apr 2017 1:36am
Actually this is really good the way it is, the words flow nicely, I do think continuing it is a good idea, it seems like a complex story that can be further elaborated on...
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Re: Re. catch me never
2nd May 2017 11:35am
Re. catch me never
25th Apr 2017 9:30pm
> I'm the architect of my internal structure
That's so INTJ think to say!
What's your building inside?
That's so INTJ think to say!
What's your building inside?
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Re: Re. catch me never
25th Apr 2017 9:48pm
Re. catch me never
Anonymous
2nd May 2017 10:20am
I couldn't adore this more. I get a new revelation with each read.
I enjoy reading your work and always learn a little something from each one.
thank you for sharing it here.
Much love xx
I enjoy reading your work and always learn a little something from each one.
thank you for sharing it here.
Much love xx
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Re: Re. catch me never
2nd May 2017 11:37am
Thank you Miki, so pleased you like, means a lot and for the RL. All created from random words. In future, when I have nothing to write, I will grab a bunch of words and create something. :) xx
Re. catch me never
15th May 2017 12:03pm
escape me never, the swindler would say,
but you're a fleet fox, too elusive for his projector eyes;
endless fascination, we yearn to capture...
but you're a fleet fox, too elusive for his projector eyes;
endless fascination, we yearn to capture...
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Re: Re. catch me never
15th May 2017 12:09pm
Thank you John, always appreciate you. Too many swindlers have crossed my path hence I'm always running. :)
Re. catch me never
21st May 2019 4:35am
im always looking forward to seeing you on my update list of goodies,
absolutely meaningful
love you ladybug!!
absolutely meaningful
love you ladybug!!
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Re. catch me never
21st May 2019 6:47am
Warm to the erotic euphemism. Favourite lines:
i predict you a night under a felon sky
a well wish before I leave
crush my violet divide
pull me into your quicksand
you debonair bloke
suspended from my hip sway
ceaseless guru, invading my chakra
a thief, trying to break my code
I'm the architect of my internal structure
it's my magic, my fortress
I feel your fervour
trying to puncture my life force
i predict you a night under a felon sky
a well wish before I leave
crush my violet divide
pull me into your quicksand
you debonair bloke
suspended from my hip sway
ceaseless guru, invading my chakra
a thief, trying to break my code
I'm the architect of my internal structure
it's my magic, my fortress
I feel your fervour
trying to puncture my life force
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