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If you can not forgive me
Then forget all but not me
Forget even what you have to forgive
I will be your tattoo
I will be your lips ruby
The moon on dark nights
Reflecting your Sun
He planted me and I grew tall
Green leaves to the heavens
But I chose to go down
Become coal
And coal burns and coal chokes
This karma I can not unmake
To become Tree
Again
Karma is Dharma
My lesson is my choice
I accept the lesson of the Tree
Accept the pressure of the earth
Accept the pressure beneath the mountain
For my choice was my destiny
To become diamond
Leave your head on my shoulder
For there will be dark nights
I'll hold you through the dark nights
So you don't have to leave
Leave without love
If you leave who shall love you
Who will kneel down
And sing you your song
Published 5th Apr 2017
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5th Apr 2017 2:56am
5th Apr 2017 3:31am
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Apr 2017 5:38am
5th Apr 2017 5:35am
Well dear, i have to say how much and deep this touched and penetrated
every inch of my little stribbling up heart Thank you for the ballooning effect
within, It felt very nice, naturally pleasant
It must be raining from the ocean, I have sea water streaming down my face..literally
every inch of my little stribbling up heart Thank you for the ballooning effect
within, It felt very nice, naturally pleasant
It must be raining from the ocean, I have sea water streaming down my face..literally
5th Apr 2017 8:51am
5th Apr 2017 1:08pm
Anonymous
5th Apr 2017 4:58pm
Hey Whale......outstanding ink......I really enjoyed the feel of this.......peaceful realization of the heart.......enjoyed much.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Apr 2017 7:37pm
5th Apr 2017 8:27pm
Your writers are divine and they sparkle like the diamond you keep within you and aspire to. I love the soulful and zen wisdom contained in this. Namaste brother.
"Leave your head on my shoulder
For there will be dark nights
I'll hold you through the dark nights
So you don't have to leave "
This stanza is shatteringly intimate and beautiful. Well done.
"Leave your head on my shoulder
For there will be dark nights
I'll hold you through the dark nights
So you don't have to leave "
This stanza is shatteringly intimate and beautiful. Well done.
5th Apr 2017 9:24pm
5th Apr 2017 9:54pm
6th Apr 2017 4:54pm
Anonymous
8th Apr 2017 3:14pm
whale, i don't know how this one slipped by me...
... it feels like i have buried the umbilical cord of my subconscious herein and been nourished.
loved this
namaste
... it feels like i have buried the umbilical cord of my subconscious herein and been nourished.
loved this
namaste
9th Apr 2017 6:56pm
