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A Mind Off-Grid, Nr.04 - Dodgy Journey
Maybe if might perhaps alternatively should
can’t when time allows, but busy now with
sorting divided mind to keep it fickle enough
not to know but fooled pretending I am
moving on the spiritual journey subtle enough
for impressions but not really challenging
the ego dodges the Truth the Light so well.
Published 4th Apr 2017
| Edited 7th Mar 2024
Author's Note
A Mind Off-Grid, Nr.03 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/268256-a-mind-off-grid/
A Mind Off-Grid, Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/269673-annual-awards/
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/268256-a-mind-off-grid/
A Mind Off-Grid, Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/269673-annual-awards/
(photo credit: denys-nevozhai-DlnK1KOREds-unsplash)
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maybe the way
why what
it takes
the next left
and wonders
where it leads... :)
why what
it takes
the next left
and wonders
where it leads... :)
Nice guidance - just what I needed. The way forward is now clear by keeping the sense of wonder up front.
5th Apr 2017 3:01am
Wow just. This is impressive because it's written in such a way that I read and understood it perfectly.
5th Apr 2017 7:45pm
6th Apr 2017 3:15am
I had to work hard to get the sense of this piece and the minute I thought I had it - it vanished - this is not a bad thing - I think some poems should make you work :-)
very clever piece :-)
very clever piece :-)
