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A Peaceful Smile
"Before the winds were born and there were signs of life,
your beauty was already stirring inside my soul."
Star light shine down for me this night
for I may see just one more time
through hungry eyes
a solemn soul still
in contemplation
Strokes gentle in a sea of silk
reflected in a perfect way
showing beauty
unknown still
seeing faults
Night carry your breeze to her side
blow away any guilt
leaving just
visions still
and a peaceful smile
your beauty was already stirring inside my soul."
Star light shine down for me this night
for I may see just one more time
through hungry eyes
a solemn soul still
in contemplation
Strokes gentle in a sea of silk
reflected in a perfect way
showing beauty
unknown still
seeing faults
Night carry your breeze to her side
blow away any guilt
leaving just
visions still
and a peaceful smile
Published 4th Apr 2017
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5th Apr 2017 3:03am
As soft as moonlight and as far away and close - fine write
"Strokes gentle in a sea of silk"
"Strokes gentle in a sea of silk"
5th Apr 2017 4:21am
"Before the winds were born and there were signs of life,
your beauty was already stirring inside my soul."
This was beautiful, the way another speaks to our soul...
your beauty was already stirring inside my soul."
This was beautiful, the way another speaks to our soul...
5th Apr 2017 3:09pm
I agree with Kasai, the first two lines are so beautiful (as is the rest of your poem)
5th Apr 2017 9:46pm
6th Apr 2017 2:39pm
