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mist fills the meadow

darkness and gloom rule the sky

songbirds drift away
JusTim_
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Re. haiku
30th Mar 2017 5:58pm
It's always sad when the songbirds go away. Quite a nice haiku, though!
DaisyGrace
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30th Mar 2017 6:01pm
Thank you dear...Hope they return
JusTim_
Re. haiku
30th Mar 2017 8:06pm
Great feel and sense of time and place in this haiku - congrats
whale
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1st Apr 2017 3:48am
Thanks 🐋 Whale
JusTim_
Re. haiku
1st Apr 2017 1:35am
Beautiful  .. song birds will return ... they sing of hope ..
jemac
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1st Apr 2017 3:48am
I sure do hope that they do 🙂
JusTim_
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1st Apr 2017 2:23am
There is a certain, I don't know how to put it into words...a certain stillness maybe?? I just know I like it.
cnbsoulmates
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1st Apr 2017 3:49am
Thanks so much 🙂
JusTim_
Re. haiku
1st Apr 2017 9:48am
lovely haiku
SweetOblivion
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Re: Re. haiku
1st Apr 2017 12:04pm
Merci 🙂
JusTim_

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