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Relations.
I wrote this with my current partner over messenger. I am 'K'; she is 'M'. She has agreed for me to put this up.
K: Time infinitely long,
Space stupendously wide
Im just standing here
Looking into your eyes.
M:and in those eyes i see,
a life of misery
K: But she does not despair
For she is still aware
That life's worth living
M:and the world is full of giving
K: whether you take or a receiving
Life is still fleeting
But when i look in your eyes,
Everything is forgotten
Like my mind turned rotten.
M: and when i see your smile
i feel as if though i could run for a mile
K: and when you laugh
You take me out of this world
Back to the beginning, the start
Of existing between monotone
And duplicity, where i first met you
You broke that strain upon my life
Where there was nothing but blank.
K: Time infinitely long,
Space stupendously wide
Im just standing here
Looking into your eyes.
M:and in those eyes i see,
a life of misery
K: But she does not despair
For she is still aware
That life's worth living
M:and the world is full of giving
K: whether you take or a receiving
Life is still fleeting
But when i look in your eyes,
Everything is forgotten
Like my mind turned rotten.
M: and when i see your smile
i feel as if though i could run for a mile
K: and when you laugh
You take me out of this world
Back to the beginning, the start
Of existing between monotone
And duplicity, where i first met you
You broke that strain upon my life
Where there was nothing but blank.
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