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Mr. One and Mr. Two
I open the door after a long day of classes.
My students wait for me
Supper and lube in hand.
I collapse on the crimson couch.
Rebellious
Subordinate
Mr. One unlaces my heels
He bathes my sore feet
With warm towels and kisses
Mr. Two unties my bun
He combs his hands through my hair
While feeding me luscious raspberries.
Command
Comply
I reach over to Mr. One’s chin
“give me my laces”
I wrap around his testicles
Once, twice
Around the bone I wrap and kiss
Mr. Two is at attention
Rubber band in hand
Pop on the balls
Pluck on the cock
Ever so wince of pain on the lips
His soft caress
My crisp stroke
Crimson as the couch
Erect as the Eiffel
Time for tickles, inside and out
Mr. One slides me in
Mr. Two slides in him
Down the water slide we go
One, two, three
My twat pulsates
His penis throbs
My students wait for me
Supper and lube in hand.
I collapse on the crimson couch.
Rebellious
Subordinate
Mr. One unlaces my heels
He bathes my sore feet
With warm towels and kisses
Mr. Two unties my bun
He combs his hands through my hair
While feeding me luscious raspberries.
Command
Comply
I reach over to Mr. One’s chin
“give me my laces”
I wrap around his testicles
Once, twice
Around the bone I wrap and kiss
Mr. Two is at attention
Rubber band in hand
Pop on the balls
Pluck on the cock
Ever so wince of pain on the lips
His soft caress
My crisp stroke
Crimson as the couch
Erect as the Eiffel
Time for tickles, inside and out
Mr. One slides me in
Mr. Two slides in him
Down the water slide we go
One, two, three
My twat pulsates
His penis throbs
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Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 7:53am
Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 12:03pm
I hope you continue to enjoy my seductive words and leave comments that are so educating. I love the word erudite, it is a new one for me.
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 12:31pm
Excellent storytelling! N I was with you all the way until Mr. One got filled lol
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Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 12:37pm
Thank you for joining me on the adventure. I totally get the apprehensions of being filled by a man. I hope you continue to enjoy my enchanting powers.
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 12:43pm
Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 2:29pm
Thank you, more is in the works, so keep tuned. I might even have to continue this story sometime.
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
Anonymous
25th Mar 2017 2:25pm
Hilarious. Yes, I winced too!
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Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 2:30pm
Good, I want the pain to emanate to your body. Thank you for your time and comments.
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2017 5:51pm
Now this is something else...
"Crimson as the couch
Erect as the Eiffel" > hilarious
Welcome to Deep Underground, DomistLoral
"Crimson as the couch
Erect as the Eiffel" > hilarious
Welcome to Deep Underground, DomistLoral
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Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
26th Mar 2017 9:58am
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
26th Mar 2017 6:54am
Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
26th Mar 2017 9:59am
Only in my fantasy. I do love education and may teach someday. Thank you for your comment.
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
31st Mar 2017 4:50am
teachers also need sex
students training
and
you enjoy a threesome
my,
I have never so done
but perhaps now in my mental capacity and imbued fantasy
I may join your classes
old may be
perhaps an experience I'd cherish
ere for the other world I leave
Hope you will my anxiety
relieve
as sex alone has been my mainstay and life's release
without it what is sex ask me
I shall becumming
again and again
you may read me
This also is mere fantasy
do excuse me
students training
and
you enjoy a threesome
my,
I have never so done
but perhaps now in my mental capacity and imbued fantasy
I may join your classes
old may be
perhaps an experience I'd cherish
ere for the other world I leave
Hope you will my anxiety
relieve
as sex alone has been my mainstay and life's release
without it what is sex ask me
I shall becumming
again and again
you may read me
This also is mere fantasy
do excuse me
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Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
31st Mar 2017 10:54am
let me train you to be the perfect servant... I will care for you.... you will care for me.... .... I work all day.... to care for you.... you work all night.... to care for me.... ....Multiple cummings and goings.... .... I will hold you.... I will hold your anxiety.... I will hold you... Till you breath no more...
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Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
10th Mar 2018 6:05pm
you need a deep and vast playground to live out all your dreams upon the lucky. delightful.
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11th Mar 2018 5:08am
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Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
13th Mar 2018 1:03am
Sometimes short can leave the most room for self exploration. Thank you for the comment.
Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
25th Mar 2018 9:20pm
Though I've never taken an interest in being filled by a man I fancy your poem very much. I can understand your interest in men together since I am fascinated by women together. Your poem is a rocket of sexual energy. I was enthralled by your erudition. There is magic in your erotic visions. ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
27th Mar 2018 8:17pm
Thank you. Erotic poetry tends to have that effect even when it is not your fantasy.
Re: Re. Mr. One and Mr. Two
27th Mar 2018 8:34pm
When erotic poetry is as scintillating as yours, it becomes fascinating to me even if it is unfamiliar territory. ;-)
John
John
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10th Apr 2018 5:54pm
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10th Apr 2018 8:45pm
Anonymous
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10th Apr 2018 8:48pm
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