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Eyes of the storm
My lover, why must you be so far away?
My arms cannot embrace the ghost of you.
I am chained where sorrow casts blue shadow
and my tears catch a faint sparkle of the waning moon.
I wear them like rosary beads and pray to ephemeral Gods.
I came to you unashamed, tasted your fervor
hot on my tongue and swallowed the heat of us, of carnality.
We burn in the madness of it; this thing we call passion.
In the anguish of a callous reality we wait for the rain
to drive our loneliness into the gutters, as the storm
embraces our phantoms, indulgent, in the desires of flesh.
There is a meadow of contentment, between dawns and sunsets,
and one day the craving of our hearts will be more than a poem.
My arms cannot embrace the ghost of you.
I am chained where sorrow casts blue shadow
and my tears catch a faint sparkle of the waning moon.
I wear them like rosary beads and pray to ephemeral Gods.
I came to you unashamed, tasted your fervor
hot on my tongue and swallowed the heat of us, of carnality.
We burn in the madness of it; this thing we call passion.
In the anguish of a callous reality we wait for the rain
to drive our loneliness into the gutters, as the storm
embraces our phantoms, indulgent, in the desires of flesh.
There is a meadow of contentment, between dawns and sunsets,
and one day the craving of our hearts will be more than a poem.
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Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 6:10am
lovely Kasai such a deeply passionate write.. a haunting love..
beautiful..
love Crim
beautiful..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 8:12am
Thank you, Crim, a great compliment from a talented poetess. So glad you came to visit...
Re. Eyes of the storm
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2017 6:13am
`and one day the craving of our hearts will be more than a poem`
Such an intense play on words,
Lady kasai ... just brilliant
~love to you, Devin

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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 9:04am
Such a sweet comment, Devlin I truly appreciate it, kind lady. Thank you much...
Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 6:24am
lovers see only each other
in the black liquid sorrow of the storm;
desires of bodies embracing, with nothing on but the rain -
they go beyond poetry, Kas...
in the black liquid sorrow of the storm;
desires of bodies embracing, with nothing on but the rain -
they go beyond poetry, Kas...
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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 10:20am
Yes they do, John, a lover's embrace is deeper than the darkness, wilder than the storm, and carries the scent of rain. Thank you for the beautiful comment...
Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 9:12am
"We burn in the madness of it; this thing we call passion" > the line between madness and passion is thin...
Such an amazing write, Kasai
I think the first line and the last line in a poem are really important and yours are always impressive!
Such an amazing write, Kasai
I think the first line and the last line in a poem are really important and yours are always impressive!
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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 8:52pm
Madness and passion, yes, pehaps the line is just a blur. Thanks for the lovely comment, Duende, I enjoyed the visit...
Re. Eyes of the storm
23rd Mar 2017 12:23pm
What a wonderfully warm sunrise on-a-winters-day of a poem, Kas. It embodies all things that are love and desire, but most of all hope.
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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
24th Mar 2017 2:31am
Ah, hope, that thing that keeps us going even in the storm. Thank you, wise one, glad you decided to keep it...
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23rd Mar 2017 12:32pm
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24th Mar 2017 7:40am
Re. Eyes of the storm
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2017 2:14pm
I am a bit thunderstruck by this beauty. Simply gorgeous. I'm going to keep this one close for future readings, if I may

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24th Mar 2017 7:33am
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Re. Eyes of the storm
24th Mar 2017 8:32pm
Your poems rarely tell stories with beginnings, middles, and ends, so much as present us with a series of powerful poetic images. The effect is a bit like looking into a kaleidoscope of language. This poem is brimming with great lines which are strong enough that, when removed from context, still work as aphorisms, like "My arms cannot embrace the ghost of you." You have a real gift. x
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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
25th Mar 2017 6:12am
'A kaleidoscope of language,' that's beautiful, Jack. To be acknowkedged by such a talented writer is quite a compliment and I thank you much for a place on the list. Greatly appreciate the visit...
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Anonymous
24th Mar 2017 11:01pm
Sweet Kasai...I have been gone a week and I come back and read this...smh....you know I need not say another thing...emotions have swelled...I will be hanging on to this one my friend...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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Re: Re. Eyes of the storm
25th Mar 2017 6:07am
Good to see you back, sweet lady, missed your visits. Those beautiful comments of yours, always leaving me with smiles. Thank you much, Taryn, flattered you kept this one...
Re. Eyes of the storm
31st Mar 2017 8:18am
To me "There is a meadow of contentment.." was the most impressive and passionate line of the poem. :)
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31st Mar 2017 8:39am
Re. Eyes of the storm
16th Feb 2021 8:49pm
Unlike the eye of the storm, there is no calmness in your desire to be together. The passion more like the cyclone force that swirls around you.
The poem made me feel the energy that being apart is generating; and to spark like lightning when you finally can physically touch. May the passion keep your madness at bay until you do.
The poem made me feel the energy that being apart is generating; and to spark like lightning when you finally can physically touch. May the passion keep your madness at bay until you do.
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