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Eternal
we will rise
From the ashes of yesterday....
to become the Seraph's of tomorrow
You and I,
Perfect where perfection never was
You, with eyes of marble
And I with Onyx wings
S o a r I n g
Further into an abyss
Where privacy can be stroked
by the tips of our wings
A n d
I will recite poetry of long-gone
centuries that spark volcanoes
in my cancerous heart,
and you-perhaps-
will laugh at my fondness.
Darling I never knew
You liked such symphonies
& I will tell you
That your voice is a
s y m p h o n y
My heartbeat spiking
Reaching out to t o u c h
Your own
Itself a mere sapling
Yours, a stallion
& you will whisper
all the things,
that make you sick
for my ears to chew on
my wings will stroke your
P r e c i o u s
body in an attempt to
Free your soul
(Hidden deep within)
I am no excorcist
But my eyes will bleed
to touch more than those
fire-bitten wings
and your tired lips
Forever is a fantasy
But oh how
beautiful
that fallacy is
In your company.
You will burn my breasts
With your breath
Branding me yours
In this abyss
in yesterday's
& in that of
Malignant tomorrow's...
-Author's notes-
•This was shit...
From the ashes of yesterday....
to become the Seraph's of tomorrow
You and I,
Perfect where perfection never was
You, with eyes of marble
And I with Onyx wings
S o a r I n g
Further into an abyss
Where privacy can be stroked
by the tips of our wings
A n d
I will recite poetry of long-gone
centuries that spark volcanoes
in my cancerous heart,
and you-perhaps-
will laugh at my fondness.
Darling I never knew
You liked such symphonies
& I will tell you
That your voice is a
s y m p h o n y
My heartbeat spiking
Reaching out to t o u c h
Your own
Itself a mere sapling
Yours, a stallion
& you will whisper
all the things,
that make you sick
for my ears to chew on
my wings will stroke your
P r e c i o u s
body in an attempt to
Free your soul
(Hidden deep within)
I am no excorcist
But my eyes will bleed
to touch more than those
fire-bitten wings
and your tired lips
Forever is a fantasy
But oh how
beautiful
that fallacy is
In your company.
You will burn my breasts
With your breath
Branding me yours
In this abyss
in yesterday's
& in that of
Malignant tomorrow's...
-Author's notes-
•This was shit...
Published 21st Mar 2017
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21st Mar 2017 3:53pm
Another gem from your pen!
I'm out of words, but I know love like this... it will eat you from the inside, but you can't run...
Thank you for sharing <3
I'm out of words, but I know love like this... it will eat you from the inside, but you can't run...
Thank you for sharing <3
21st Mar 2017 4:19pm
Another gem of a comment, my dearest. Indeed a love like this will chew you up, spit you out; and attempting to run will result only in the realisation that such love is quicksand. Thank you ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Mar 2017 4:23pm
21st Mar 2017 4:22pm
And then suddenly hands pressured my throat, simultaneously filled with urging deep swallows
and stomach sexy butterflies, fucking delicious feeling
BTW this was not shit, just a sidenote ;)
and stomach sexy butterflies, fucking delicious feeling
BTW this was not shit, just a sidenote ;)
21st Mar 2017 5:15pm
Your comments are the breath I breathe, my dear. Thank you for thinking this wasn't shit. I love you❤
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
21st Mar 2017 4:22pm
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Anonymous
21st Mar 2017 4:23pm
Yessss AEM yess lol
21st Mar 2017 5:16pm
Your comment made me smile. Thank you ever so much for your read and comment :) xxxxxxxx
21st Mar 2017 5:22pm
I feel like you should have a book that I can buy! You couldn't write shit if you wanted to! Another brilliant concoction that spilled down from your pen! Xoxoxo
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21st Mar 2017 5:49pm
Your comments make me feel like I have wings and send me soaring to the heavens. You amaze me. I'm actually publishing a thing because I have to for the purposes of my degree but its contents have been edited to the point of pure bullshit now, haha. xxxxx
21st Mar 2017 7:04pm
I don't want the water downed version, I like the raw emotion and raw language I read in your writing. Don't ever water yourself down to suit anybody elses opinion. V
21st Mar 2017 9:45pm
One of the comments I got from people in my first drafts of my stuff was 'oh you swear too much' 😂 Xxxxxxxx I kinda have to play by the rules because it's for university and rejecting opinions shows that you haven't taken feedback on board which leads to a fail :/
One man's garbage is another man's treasure...I shit you not this is not shit...your fantasy filled me flush with exotic images
21st Mar 2017 5:57pm
I adore your presence on my poetry comments section Thank you!! xxxxxx
22nd Mar 2017 9:34am
22nd Mar 2017 10:21am
Thank you ever so much for reading and leaving such a pleasant comment! I appreciate you :) xxxxxxx
22nd Mar 2017 12:30pm
As many have already said, this is NOT shit... it's mesmerizing n beautiful...
22nd Mar 2017 12:35pm
'beautiful' - it's slightly ugly personally but it's meant to be. Love is destruction and i was trying to go with that. Thank you so much though,PM. I appreciate you, always.
