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DO IT AGAIN NOW HARDER PLEASE (INSPIRED BY THAT BY FLC8)
Do it again now harder, please:
I want all action, not a tease.
Don't spend so much time on foreplay,
For you and I now know the way!
So well attuned our bodies are,
We have confidence to go far.
Don't be held back by sentiment
Or shyness, my encouragement
Is given you in full measure;
You're the best, formed for my pleasure.
Ride me less gentle, more roughshod,
I'm devoted to you, sex god!
Be it on my back or my knees -
DO IT AGAIN NOW, HARDER, PLEASE!
I want all action, not a tease.
Don't spend so much time on foreplay,
For you and I now know the way!
So well attuned our bodies are,
We have confidence to go far.
Don't be held back by sentiment
Or shyness, my encouragement
Is given you in full measure;
You're the best, formed for my pleasure.
Ride me less gentle, more roughshod,
I'm devoted to you, sex god!
Be it on my back or my knees -
DO IT AGAIN NOW, HARDER, PLEASE!
Published 16th Mar 2017
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16th Mar 2017 10:37pm
This poem is not bad as it shows natural human cravings and desire for gratification. However, the audience will be limited because of the extreme content. I think you can write this same poem, couching it in euphemisms
17th Mar 2017 6:32am
You should have read the poem that sparked it. However I could not refind it last night.
17th Mar 2017 8:51am
25th Mar 2017 5:57pm
The attention to rhyme is good. Also, this feels like something some would say during sex.
