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Slainte
(For Lepp.)
We first spoke
in three word
inspiration
I
the annoying
newcomer
who's
affinity
for simple sentence
mocked
Your Deeper thought
guidance
by peers
swaths
of secret gardens
held every
fruit
that could be plucked
from a forlorn
fantastical realm
corners whipped
sly
by L shapes
defend
with offense
as part
of a world
you own
time
how quick
the sand
sold you honest
as soldier
guiding endless
masses
deft
and on to Guardian
I swear
one could hear
the trad
march
and glasses raise
on every street
Harps and guitars
fiddle
my friend
lively
that atmosphere
hear
the banter
singing
Seven drunken nights
I know
your smile
Seamus
I've walked the Holy ground
of St. Fintans
to visit
a God
just missing you
by a
few simple grains
what I know is...
good eggs are rare
so many go
hopes pray
forever
that a "hat tip"
collects
what is deserved
https://youtu.be/fpj-VHER0kM
(entered in The Untold DUP Tribute)
We first spoke
in three word
inspiration
I
the annoying
newcomer
who's
affinity
for simple sentence
mocked
Your Deeper thought
guidance
by peers
swaths
of secret gardens
held every
fruit
that could be plucked
from a forlorn
fantastical realm
corners whipped
sly
by L shapes
defend
with offense
as part
of a world
you own
time
how quick
the sand
sold you honest
as soldier
guiding endless
masses
deft
and on to Guardian
I swear
one could hear
the trad
march
and glasses raise
on every street
Harps and guitars
fiddle
my friend
lively
that atmosphere
hear
the banter
singing
Seven drunken nights
I know
your smile
Seamus
I've walked the Holy ground
of St. Fintans
to visit
a God
just missing you
by a
few simple grains
what I know is...
good eggs are rare
so many go
hopes pray
forever
that a "hat tip"
collects
what is deserved
https://youtu.be/fpj-VHER0kM
(entered in The Untold DUP Tribute)
Published 2nd Mar 2017
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2nd Mar 2017 10:08pm
Hello, good being of the forest
in my humble unbiased opinion, this sir, is a masterpiece. the Rory link was icing
Go raibh míle maith agat, chairde
in my humble unbiased opinion, this sir, is a masterpiece. the Rory link was icing
Go raibh míle maith agat, chairde
3rd Mar 2017 4:38am
4th Mar 2017 00:58am
Now craic may be biased ;-)...I jest saying that, the man has integrity...i do agree that this is indeed a wonderful read and gets better with each one :-)
4th Mar 2017 1:32am
Hahaha He is a Kind soul and deserving. Thank You so very much for commenting this one Kate...appreciate that You visited, but Truly it broke my heart that no-one but him had commented this...Thank You!!!
Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 1:54am
This tribute is long overdue and I know few have done within their profiles but i dont remember one submitted in a comp. He definitely deserves this well thought out and a great display of respect and admiration. I for one have underestimated the man behind the profile on few occasions and i'm so glad that i was proven wrong because he has shown how true he stays to himself and his beliefs.
And your signature style of wit with poetic waxing is undeniable Soul.
And your signature style of wit with poetic waxing is undeniable Soul.
4th Mar 2017 1:58am
Thank You for the Props Babe :))) And support of The Lepp!!! Amen to what You said ...I mean Eamon..
