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The Sensuality of Looking
my friend has a body
a body with breasts and butt
like waves they bounce –
just a bit, every time she struts
I do confess, I stare, I studied and compared
so, I gave a glance
and studied all to my heart’s content
there is a borderline between curiosity and lust
or appreciation, admiration, and craving
the senses lost to sensuality
yes, I admit, I looked and enjoyed
my friend has a body
a body with breasts and butt
like waves they bounce –
just a bit, every time she struts
a body with breasts and butt
like waves they bounce –
just a bit, every time she struts
I do confess, I stare, I studied and compared
so, I gave a glance
and studied all to my heart’s content
there is a borderline between curiosity and lust
or appreciation, admiration, and craving
the senses lost to sensuality
yes, I admit, I looked and enjoyed
my friend has a body
a body with breasts and butt
like waves they bounce –
just a bit, every time she struts
Published 27th Feb 2017
| Edited 8th Mar 2017
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27th Feb 2017 9:37pm
Cyclical (1st and last verses identical). Favourite verse:
there is a border line of curious and lust
of appreciation, admiration, craving
the senses lost to sensuality
yes, I admit, I looked and enjoyed
there is a border line of curious and lust
of appreciation, admiration, craving
the senses lost to sensuality
yes, I admit, I looked and enjoyed
28th Feb 2017 6:00pm
cyclical, not you're thing in a poem? I like the repetition :) I'm glad you like that verse! I rather like it to :)
28th Feb 2017 9:28pm
Depending on the poem, I like the cyclical, the coming full circle - no criticism.
8th Mar 2017 00:13am
I'm glad you like it, I was just wondering, if there had been something I'd done wrong. Thank you :)
