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Freestyle
you can't rap you look like a rat, who got caught in the mouse trap.
Pussy you're weak - you gonna scare me? yeah right with what?
you cant even hook me up with those shitty words of yours
cuz i know how it goes, your rimes blows and i can defeat you
with my eyes closed. so whatch out cuz im gonna knock you out
you think you're wack because youre're black? what the fuck is up with that?
If you say some shit to me while i rap, i'll smack you in your fucking face for that.
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and If ou think im weak? well fuck you, and fuck your friends too
i want to go to streets and scream so i would know is it me or
it's just you who cant keep the secrets to himself because
you're the one who's dumb and i have nothing to do with this dude.
there's one thing too, dont take it into your head
it's not that i don't like you
it's just because you look like shit and i can't describe you
sometimes i get mad for no reason, but im not like you
you can't put lyrics in the song, and that's what i do.
By: Devey
Hello everyone, i just wanted to say thank you for reading my stuff and i wanted to get criticism to my work so i could build myself better in this stuff. Feel free to comment.
Pussy you're weak - you gonna scare me? yeah right with what?
you cant even hook me up with those shitty words of yours
cuz i know how it goes, your rimes blows and i can defeat you
with my eyes closed. so whatch out cuz im gonna knock you out
you think you're wack because youre're black? what the fuck is up with that?
If you say some shit to me while i rap, i'll smack you in your fucking face for that.
------------------------------------------------------------
and If ou think im weak? well fuck you, and fuck your friends too
i want to go to streets and scream so i would know is it me or
it's just you who cant keep the secrets to himself because
you're the one who's dumb and i have nothing to do with this dude.
there's one thing too, dont take it into your head
it's not that i don't like you
it's just because you look like shit and i can't describe you
sometimes i get mad for no reason, but im not like you
you can't put lyrics in the song, and that's what i do.
By: Devey
Hello everyone, i just wanted to say thank you for reading my stuff and i wanted to get criticism to my work so i could build myself better in this stuff. Feel free to comment.
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