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I Do Not Love You Like The Crescent Moon
I do not love you like the crescent moon
majestically erupting into a star filled night
nor do I love you like the pearl painted swan
gliding effortlessly across a pristine pond
Fear not for I do most certainly love you -
But my love is more like a cool crisp apple
one succulent bite bringing sustenance to life
My love lives in our fresh laundered linens
dried in the comforting winds blowing off the sea
My love is here
My love is now
It is in everything I touch
It is in everything I Do
I may not love you like the luster melting hearts
glistening off a ten carat diamond ring
but you can be sure my love lives daily
in my every breath and my every dream
majestically erupting into a star filled night
nor do I love you like the pearl painted swan
gliding effortlessly across a pristine pond
Fear not for I do most certainly love you -
But my love is more like a cool crisp apple
one succulent bite bringing sustenance to life
My love lives in our fresh laundered linens
dried in the comforting winds blowing off the sea
My love is here
My love is now
It is in everything I touch
It is in everything I Do
I may not love you like the luster melting hearts
glistening off a ten carat diamond ring
but you can be sure my love lives daily
in my every breath and my every dream
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Re. I Do Not Love You Like The Crescent Moon
22nd Feb 2017 11:56pm
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23rd Feb 2017 00:04am
Re. I Do Not Love You Like The Crescent Moon
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2017 00:02am
Wow...that fair takes the breath...
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23rd Feb 2017 00:09am
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23rd Feb 2017 00:14am
Re. I Do Not Love You Like The Crescent Moon
23rd Feb 2017 00:16am
This speaks of a deep abiding love, I think. One that is ever present and expressed in many little ways. Best kind to have and give. :)
Willow
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23rd Feb 2017 00:24am
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23rd Feb 2017 1:22am
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23rd Feb 2017 1:29am
Re. I Do Not Love You Like The Crescent Moon
23rd Feb 2017 1:54am
Quite well conceived. The apple reference was really a nice surprise. Well done.
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24th Feb 2017 9:46pm
Re. I Do Not Love You Like The Crescent Moon
23rd Feb 2017 11:37am
"My love is here
My love is now
It is in everything I touch
It is in everything I Do" > and that's what love is all about...
Such a beautiful write, Tim
My love is now
It is in everything I touch
It is in everything I Do" > and that's what love is all about...
Such a beautiful write, Tim
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26th Feb 2017 7:46pm
I love ' my love lives in our fresh laundered linens ' , a sublime poem....
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