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Drone Of The Bees
Away! Away! ---
Instrument from flower.
How dare you counter fate
In these late immeasurable hours.
Golden and agape;
The sun-soaked blossom
reaches for nothing ---
Clinging, it seems
To all it believes in.
Such pestilence its trying
Fluttering in the wind.
Buzzing, its counterpart ---
An incision its whim.
What nectar, such penance,
How harried, such sin ---
Falling as dust on petals.
Saving such garrulous moments
For those who give in.
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Footnote: Inspired by this quote:
'The claw
Of the magnolia
Drunk on its own scents,
Asks nothing of life'
-From 'Paralytic', by Sylvia Plath
Written by
PoetsRevenge
Published 17th Feb 2017
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17th Feb 2017 10:56pm
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17th Feb 2017 11:02pm
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18th Feb 2017 9:57am
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18th Feb 2017 1:22pm
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20th Feb 2017 1:40am
Thank you, I did play around with a lot of different words before choosing the ones I did; I felt that the fewer words used, the more weight they carry so I'm glad the effort shows... Thanks for reading...
Re. Drone Of The Bees
2nd Mar 2017 2:03pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9494/
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9494/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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Anonymous
2nd Mar 2017 8:46pm
i can see what all the buzz is about.
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3rd Mar 2017 5:35pm
Re. Drone Of The Bees
9th Mar 2017 5:01am
Such a profound write with much attention to detail...
I can be completely wrong, but it reminds me of how the bees are facing extinction...
(thank you so much for the RL add, I really appreciate that)
I can be completely wrong, but it reminds me of how the bees are facing extinction...
(thank you so much for the RL add, I really appreciate that)
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9th Mar 2017 6:43am
Re. Drone Of The Bees
Wow, that's a great observation I didn't think of that one, that's a poignant truth and a great cause I'm happy to support, as well as that of our outspoken voices through poetry, I liked how outspoken your poem was and how universal also, I was happy to put it on my list :)
Re: Re. Drone Of The Bees
9th Mar 2017 6:55am
Well, I'm fascinated by the lives of the bees, they are amazing creatures! Thank you for calling my poem outspoken :-)
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10th Mar 2017 5:19am