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Now...Eyes See
Now Eyes See
Towards the sky
I no longer peek
at the stars' glow
fearful of the secrets
I kept they'd show...
I take no more walks
along the beachside
painfully aware the
crash of waves can't
silence my cry...
Life's a 'play' of many things
woes tatter'd, emotions abound
graven souls, a pith heartbeat
void without sound...
Subtle realizations arc
I'm a maze, a bein'
awakened to this
noesis I'm seein...'
Towards the sky
I no longer peek
at the stars' glow
fearful of the secrets
I kept they'd show...
I take no more walks
along the beachside
painfully aware the
crash of waves can't
silence my cry...
Life's a 'play' of many things
woes tatter'd, emotions abound
graven souls, a pith heartbeat
void without sound...
Subtle realizations arc
I'm a maze, a bein'
awakened to this
noesis I'm seein...'
Published 16th Feb 2017
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16th Feb 2017 7:15am
Wow baby, this was so deep and beautiful it really makes me want to cry.
Amazingly well done
Amazingly well done
16th Feb 2017 9:24am
Aaaaawww, thank you butter cup! Really didn't think anyone would feel this but I'm happy know I was wrong :) muah!
Anonymous
16th Feb 2017 7:48am
shiiiiiit papi
this makes a girl reflect a little too much ...
... salt in my coffee cup
cheers for a thought provoking read
xo
this makes a girl reflect a little too much ...
... salt in my coffee cup
cheers for a thought provoking read
xo
16th Feb 2017 9:27am
Oohhh now there's a hint to another possible amazing ink coming soon to a site near us! lol at least hopefully cuz you know how we readers get without your ink presence! lol thank u mami, ur the best! :)
16th Feb 2017 11:34am
16th Feb 2017 1:20pm
Hey thanks so much my friend I'm glad you liked this ink... Appreciate the support too. :)
16th Feb 2017 12:45pm
The way you word things in this poem is really good at showing how these realisations are affecting your life and behaviour. Also a good use of rhyme. X
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16th Feb 2017 9:36pm
Yea a stupid, cruel world... thank you for support my friend, I appreciate it greatly...
16th Feb 2017 7:31pm
I wonder if the same beaches and waves witnessed your tears as did mine. Beautifully written, my friend. Many hugs...
Willow
Willow
16th Feb 2017 9:38pm
It probably was! lol thank you my sweetness I'm grateful always for your continued support :)
17th Feb 2017 9:32am
When the stars can no longer keep our secrets
and the waves cannot drown our sorrow,
sadness has taken us...
and the waves cannot drown our sorrow,
sadness has taken us...
17th Feb 2017 10:08am
Oh Kasai...I agree, but let's hope for happier days... Thank you, I'm honored...grateful always for you. :)
17th Feb 2017 9:35pm
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19th Feb 2017 2:30pm
How to comment on a piece that left me speechless...
Know that your words are felt...
((hug))
Know that your words are felt...
((hug))
24th Feb 2017 11:57pm
24th Feb 2017 10:44am
I feel all types of sadness , but also a kind of peace at the realization
Almost like a cleansing from clarity. Masterful
Almost like a cleansing from clarity. Masterful
25th Feb 2017 00:00am
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4th Mar 2017 9:46pm
'I take no more walks
along the beachside
painfully aware the
crash of waves can't
silence my cry..'
deep. So deep. TY for sharing.
along the beachside
painfully aware the
crash of waves can't
silence my cry..'
deep. So deep. TY for sharing.
5th Mar 2017 00:53am
Coming from someone whose depth has no bounds... I must take it as a super gracious praise... thank you my dear, appreciate you :)
