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Valentine's Day

Such a beautiful day
Friends, loved ones and you......

Written by FLC8

Published 13th Feb 2017

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Re. Valentine's Day

14th Feb 2017 6:05am

I would capitalise the "you" in the spirit of Omar Khayyam's "Thou", which these lines have reminded me of.

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14th Feb 2017 12:24pm

Thank you

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Re. Valentine's Day

18th Feb 2017 4:27pm

so small
Now I am also proud
Thou art a
YOU
POET
Lady

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18th Feb 2017 4:29pm

Thank you dear poet

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19th Feb 2017 5:16pm

kindness be thy share when love notes you with your romantic lover compare do share lady poet

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20th Feb 2017 8:19pm

Thanks for the comment

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15th Aug 2017 8:53pm

ok all ld ones being cleared 300 pending still

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